目前翻译遇到一个困境,我试着用两种笔触下去写,
一个稍微偏难句,一个稍微平易近人。
大家觉得哪句比较好?
如果有原因的话,也麻烦告知。
感谢~
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Moreover, change our lifestyles, stops buying products which are
harmful to the environment. Avoid purchasing anything that are like fur,
ivory, which are made from endangered species.
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In addition, changes our lifestyles. Do not purchase products which are
harmful to environment, and then, also not to buying anything made from
endangered species, such as fur, ivory.
再者,改变生活习惯。不购买有害环境的产品、不购买濒临绝种物种所制造的东
西,像是皮草、象牙等等。