目前在写英文自传，不知道自己这样写是否正确
想请版上各位帮我检查文法及润饰，先谢谢各位！
_________________________________________________________________________
1.此外，我担任系学会的学编股长，主要负责邀稿及润饰文字内容。身为一位编辑者，
我学到与他人合作的能力。
Besides, I worked as an editor in the students' association, my
responsibility was to invite contributions of articles and refine them. As
being an editor, I learned the ability of working well with others.
2.大三时，我担任编辑实务组长，因为一同采访的伙伴忙于外务，从撰写采访大纲
、联系受访者、润饰文字内容都由我独立完成。借由此次经验，我了解时间管理及
团队合作的重要。
In the university of my third year, I was a leader of editing and reporting
team. Because one of members spent most time on personal affairs, I outlined
for the report, contacted interviewees and refined articles on my own. With
this experience, I realized that time management and cooperation is
essential.
3. 我的工作内容为撰写企画及人力招募，并安排人选至合适的职务，以及连络厂商
My responsibility was to write proposal and recruit staffs, arranged
responsibility for them and contacted the factory.
4.根据回馈显示，在活动四天中，累计参与人次高达781人次
The survey results showed that the number of attendees for the activity is
781 in four days.