※ 引述《TITZU (SYM)》之铭言：
: 大家早
: 今天有几个句子翻译的练习题，
: 想请大家帮忙指正，
: 还请大家不吝指教，谢谢大家。
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: 一、英译中
(已有其他大大讲解，我就不献丑了)
: 二、中译英
: (一)网络科技愈来愈发达，资讯取得较以前更为容易，想知道某个人的消息，只要在
: Google等网络搜寻引擎打上几个关键字就可略知一二，甚至连广告行销也以此为卖点，火
: 红了好一阵子。
: Since internet technology becomes more advance, to get information is easier
As advanced, getting ^now
: than before. If you want to know someone’s news, just key some keywords in
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^(1) ^^^ ^^^ (2) on
: Google and so on internet search engines, then you will know something. Even
other ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ (3)
: advertisement marketing uses it as a selling point, and has been flourishing
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^(4) ^^(5) ^ (6)
: for a long time.
(1) someone's news 罕见且生硬用法，建议 know the news about someone
(2) key... keywords 重复 "key" 在英文里面很难看
(3) then you will know something 生硬，且像是废话
(4) advertisement marketing = 广告_的_行销，非广告行销
(5) it 用在这里不明确 (it 是指什么？)
(6) 这个忽略的主词更不明确
: (二)台湾今年五月中旬受邀以观察员身分出席第62届世界卫生大会(WHA)，这是台湾退出
: 联合国38年后首次参与联合国体系的正式会议。
: Taiwan is invited to attend the 62nd World Health Assembly (WHA) as a
^^(1)
: observer in mid-May, this year, which is the first time Taiwan joins the
^^^^^^^^^^ (2) (3) (4)^^^^^ ^^^
: formal conference of system of UN after withdrawal from the UN 38 years.
^^^^^^^^^^删除 ^its ^ago
(1) tense 错误，现在式不是这么用的
(2) 时间放在这里读者会不确定是 invite 还是 assembly 在五月中发生
mid-May 后面不用逗号
(3) tense 错误
(4) article 错误