不好意思想请教各位
论文题目之翻译是否有误
中文为：
台日高等教育学生国际移动力之比较
英文试译为：
1. A comparative study of student's global mobility in higher education
in Taiwan and Japan
2. A comparative study of global mobility of higher education students in
Taiwan and Japan
自己看好像都有点怪怪的..
因为找不到native及英文好的人请教
上来求助建议
非常感谢各位

2比较正确, 或是可以译 A comperative study of higereducation student's global mobility from Taiwan andJapan

comparison betweenthe comparison of global mobility between higher education students in Taiwan and Japan

非常感谢各位的建议 ！我再看看怎修改比较好

以学术惯例而言你的2略胜楼上两位，仅改A comparative study为A comparison及在global前加the