发现推文好像无法连推...只好回文
※ 引述《sunset (爱情的正常性混乱)》之铭言：
: 1. 以天文物理闻名的史蒂芬灭N金，其出版的“时间简史(A Brief History of Time)”
: 是他最为人熟知的著作。
: Stephen Hawking, who is well-known in astrophysics, published his most famous
: work "A Brief History of Time".
刚才推文提到这样会显得英文句构看起来有点不连贯，略作修改即可。
Stephen Hawking is well-known for his contributions in astrophysics and his
publication "A Brief History of Time".
回应推文：的确这边删除会比较好，不然看起来不像一个完整的句子，当时未仔细想，
，感谢指正。
: 2. 即使罹患罕见疾病，霍金仍靠着先进的医疗技术延续生命，并活到了76岁。
: Though suffered from a rare disease, Hawking had still extended his live by ad
: vanced medical technology and passed away until seventy-six years old.
这里译文主要问题点在于“pass away”是单一时间点的事件，接“until”会让读者
不明所以，另外因为是“靠着”医疗技术延续生命，建议避免“had still extended”
这种“好像他可以自己掌控”的写法。
建议：
Thanks to modern medicine advancement, Hawking managed to make it to the age
of 76 despite the burden of a rare disease.
: 以上翻译若有需再修正，欢迎各位指教，谢谢！
语感养成真的非常花时间，我也还在继续努力 :D