家人在环境顾问公司工作，公司丢了一份公文翻译要他校对然后送报告，但长辈英文不好，又在重感冒中，希望有人能协助校对，谢谢
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1.中文摘要
本计画执行期间，针对台中市餐饮业进行712家业者进行油烟防制设备查核及辅导，并成功推动设置及改善空气污染防制设备79家次，经计算约削减NMHC 16,888公斤及TSP 9,508公斤之污染排放，至12月31日止，79家餐饮业者未再发生民众陈情之情事；油烟污染防制宣导说明会或座谈会完成3场次、共计235人参与；纸钱集中烧及源头减量方面，已完成办理纸钱集中清运宣导说明会3场次，纸钱集中清运共计2,661.4公吨，经计算约削减TSP
9,070公斤之污染排放，能有效维护本市空气品质。净炉法会完成6场次。露天燃烧方面，好发季节现场查核完成481件，地籍资料查询完成481处，以排放系数估算可协助削减TSP 2,775公斤、PM10 2,747公斤、SOx 498公斤、NOx 2,408公斤、CO 25,132公斤、THC 2,072公斤，以及NMHC
1,864公斤等污染逸散；室内空气品质管制方面，针对环保署第一批公告场所进行巡检及办理法规说明会议，目前二氧化碳巡检已完成110家次，四项巡检已完成31家次，幼稚园微生物相真菌、细菌检测完成10家次，公共场所室内空气污染物公告方法检测已完成13处，检查结果有2处超过法规标准。
2.英文摘要
We have inspected and given advices the air pollution control devices of 712 catering industries for the cooking exhaust. In addition, we also have helped 79 companies to install or improve their air pollution control device until 31th of December. During its implementation period we eliminated 16,888 kg of NMHC and 9,508 kg of TSP in total. As a result, no further complaints were received till now. And we also completed 3 promotional explanation sessions or seminars related to the prevention and
control of cooking exhaust were taken in place. Furthermore, our team not only accomplished 6 incinerator cleansing rituals were taken in place but also completed 3 explanation sessions of the concentrated disposal of ritual money. In regard to the concentrated incineration of ritual money, there were totally 2,661.4 tons of ritual money were concentrated, it assist in decreased 9,070 kg of TSP. The inspection at exposed burning control was conducted in 481 locations during the season; and cadastral
information was checked in 481 locations. Using discharge coefficient to estimate, it assist in decreased 2,775 kg of TSP, 2,747 kg of PM10, 498 kg of SOx, 2,408 kg of NOx, 25,132 kg of CO, 2,072 kg of THC, and 1,864 kg of NMHC. In accordance with the first announced public place of indoor air quality management, which claimed by Environmental Protection Agency (E.P.A.), had been host a relevant regulations’ promotional explanation sessions. Presently Environmental Protection Bureau of Taichung city
government has completed the CO2 inspection in 110 businesses, four parameters in 31 businesses, total fungi concentration and bacteria inspections in 10 kindergartens, and examination of the indoor air pollutant standard method in 13 public locations.