请教一下版上大大
下面是一封催款的信
麻烦提供一些意见
谢谢建议~
1.长期以来,敝公司的获利全部卡在贵公司的贷款上
Your loan payment squeeze our margin and surely cause impact on prospect
development for a long time.
: 2.过去敝公司每年有盈余,资金也可以应付
In the past, profits and circulated funds can let us manage this situation
at ease.
3.但由于去年敝司亏损,贵公司又欠款高达300万美金
: 若贵公司再不还款的话
: ,敝司将很难面对厂商的种种预付款要求了
: However, we were in deficits last year and the amount of your outstanding
debts
: is US$3,000,000
: If you still couldn't settling your accounts,
: we couldn't consent to your further prepayment request from us.

第一句改成For a long time, our firm's margin has long(去掉上面最后一个long) been hit by your loan payment.后面surely...的部份好像没对应原文，另外可改成, and thishas surely damaged our long-term development andprospect.第二句Previously, our firm achieve annual surplus for(上面achieve改achieves) successive years and retainssufficient funds for handling different situations.