以下是论文摘要的其中一句
前几天我的英文摘要被口试委员说翻的怪怪的 请我再修改
而我实在也搞不懂哪里有问题
因此想请问大家看看 究竟是哪里出了问题 谢谢!
中文原文：
人是组织的核心，因此掌握优秀员工是强化企业竞争力的重要关键。
英文翻译：
As organizational members form the core of an organization,
having outstanding employees is the key to enhancing a company’s
competitiveness.

我觉得问题是冗赘。可能可改为As the core of an organization lies in its members, outstanding employees arekey to a company’s competitiveness.

Human resource is the core of an organisation, andhaving an exceptional workforce is the key to...OR therefore the key to enhancing the business'competitiveness is to secure an exceptional workfor

楼上workforce用得好！

谢谢解惑