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原文
被保险人xxx进口影印机设备计5品项 (11 CRATES / 31 CTNS) 装载于柜号
NO. 5553220/40’内，于APR.29.2012, yyy人员拆柜进仓发现其中8 CRATES
外箱破损
翻译
The insured, xxx, had imported photocopiers and equipment contained
a total of 5 items packed in 11 crates of 31 cartons, loaded in a 40-feet
container, NO.5553220. On April 29, 2012, as soon as storage personnel
discharged the goods from the containers into warehouse, storage personnel
discovered that outer boxs of 8 crafts had been damaged.