[请益] 给外国朋友信 几个句子想问妥当吗?

楼主: DieClaire (DieClaire)   2016-06-05 10:41:25
不好意思麻烦大家了,
他是我很重要的朋友,
因为他生日所以想寄给他一张卡片到美国,
在写的过程中有几个句子不太确定是不是有完整表达我的意思,平时受益版上很多资讯,
这次麻烦大家了
1.
Sorry for the blessings might be late, but it’s my full heart.
抱歉这份祝福可能会晚到,但是这是我满满的心意
2.
回想我们大家一起吃饭、爬山的那些日子真的好快乐好难忘,有你在的时候我都觉得特别

In retrospect, those are really memorable that eating and climbing all we spen
t together. Especially I feel great when you’re with us.
3.
希望你每天都开开心心的,有不开心的事情可以跟我吐苦水,我可以分担并且分解的很快
喔哈哈!也希望你顺利的毕业,能够开始做自己真正想做的事情~
! I wish you every success in the coming days. You can confide in me if you fe
el upset, I will share from your problem. I also wish you the best on your stu
dies and graduate soon that you can start what you want to do.
4
期待我们毕业长大的样子,期待再次见到你的样子,我很想念你
Looking forward to seeing what will be look like when we graduate, looking for
ward to seeing you again . I miss you very much.
(这是最后一句话很想让整个句子很美很感动,不晓得这样子可以吗?还是有更好的意见

真的很谢谢大家!
作者: Ann13 (ann)   2016-06-05 19:27:00
Sorry..述我直言,1、2、3都太直译了
作者: antibody27 (跟我内人握握手吧)   2016-06-05 20:08:00
好中文的英文
作者: Ann13 (ann)   2016-06-05 21:18:00
1 ->Sorry that I'm afraid my wishes might be late, butit definitely came with all my heart.若是我大概会写这样,给你参考(有时候只要意思有到就好XD
楼主: DieClaire (DieClaire)   2016-06-06 01:31:00
其实我是先写英文再写中文注解啦哈哈 这样会很中式吗..
作者: kee32 (终于毕业了)   2016-06-06 08:22:00
先写英文再写中文?说反了吧…
作者: Ann13 (ann)   2016-06-06 10:33:00
那问题似乎出在:你用中文的语法在写英文

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