[请益] 文法检查

楼主: KurakiMaki (Maki)   2014-08-16 11:39:48
这是我参考网络别人的写法自己整理重写的,请问文法上面有错误吗?
黄色部分是我觉得比较有可能错的,空格是用来放名词子句的
还请大家帮忙检查一下~谢谢
The reading passage and the speaker both discuss the topic of _____.
However, the speaker disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage.
He thinks that _____ in the reading passage is questionable and offers
several reasons to oppose the article.
First of all, the reading passage mentions that _____, and therefore _____.
But the speaker says that _____. Thus, the speaker believes _____.
The second reason which the lecturer refers to a disproof is that _____.
Although the article states _____, he notes that _____.
Hence, the lecturer concludes that _____.
Finally, the author of reading passage claims that _____, whereas
the orator points out that _____. As a result, the orator considers that _____,
and that contradicts what the reading passage indicates.
作者: BuchPreis (就是有创意)   2014-08-16 19:15:00
claim我认为不妥 毕竟文章不会claim 其他文法OK应该是TOEFL模板吧 用字可以多变化一点 再加长结论段
作者: dunchee (---)   2014-08-17 01:11:00
http://www.macmillandictionary.com/ 输入 claim第一个例句
作者: BuchPreis (就是有创意)   2014-08-17 12:19:00
不不不 report或技术文献之类的当然能用claim 但用在reading passage 我个人是觉得怪 要是坚持用CL 我是会写成the author of the reading passage claims...还能顺便凑字数~对了 你后面用orator 前面也用"人"会比较好喔
作者: wohtp (会喵喵叫的大叔)   2014-08-17 18:26:00
"several reasons to opposite the article"?opposite是形容词喔即使改成oppose也很怪。虽然to oppose的确是“反对”的意思但是带有“抵抗”的含意。一篇文章又没强制力,就算你反对其论点也不到抵抗那么严重我会说"...offers several counter-arguments..."啊,这里用"opposing arguments"也可以。因为是你的论点对抗他的论点。

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