[文法] 履历用词

楼主: lovelyleejie   2014-07-23 20:11:08
履历用词
我会全心投入,
此外,我还期待从此工作获得知识
我的写法:
I would be sure to offer mine.
In addition, I expect to acquire knowledge from the job.
恳请指教!
谢谢
作者: vicario837 (维嘉里欧)   2014-07-23 20:38:00
两句都需要改 第一句 全心投入不要跟自己确定吧?I will fully devote myself to this new position.第二句 未发生的期待是look forward to不是expect原句会有这工作如果不能获得知识会不符合我的期待之意
楼主: lovelyleejie   2014-07-23 21:11:00
感谢^^
作者: tengharold (RoadMan_A)   2014-07-25 07:29:00
两个都不是履历用词,该算是自传/自荐函用词1) I would/will be fully devoted [to XXX]2) ... I also expect to learn / look forward tolearning from this jobsorry 没看到楼上 v 大已写 fully devote myself to那用法完全 ok

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