版上各位大家好
如果第一次跟外国女生邀约该怎么写才比较恰当?
双方是经由父亲朋友的朋友所认识
没有见过面但互相知道对方
由于她可能会来台湾一趟，想趁机见个面
我目前拟好的草稿如下:
I got information from Aunt, she said you will come back Taiwan for
traveling. Aunt suggested me that maybe we can meet in Taiwan. I also agree
that is a good chance to know each other. Could I invite you? If it is
convenient for you I will arrange a lunch or dinner.
Please let me know your answer or question.
这样写会不会太过唐突或无理?该怎样修饰较恰当?
十分感谢各位的帮忙及指导
谢谢!

第一段除了文法的小问题外(像the information)可以 我会建议把could I invite you那句拿掉 三句话讲同一件事会显得有点desperate (当然如果对方是你潜在交往对象那就没关系) 第二段 let me know 后面可用 if it is agood idea/okay with you等 对方没有义务要给你答案或问你问题

谢谢V大的指正与提醒