[请益] 转职自传求批

楼主: joyca (joyca)   2016-07-04 04:34:01
Name
Cell:XXXX-XXX-XXX。Email: XXXXXXXXX@gmail.com
EDUCATION
-XX University
-Bachelor of Aerospace Engineering 2011/Jun
SKILLS
-Good experience in product design(plastic)
-Catia V6-3D Modeling (Solid, Surfacing, Assembly), 2D Drawing
-Can work on Catia V6, Auto CAD, familiar with Pro-E, Solid works & Ansys
-Design & Engineering problem discuss & solving with customer & related units
STRENGTH AND ABILITES
-3-year experience in product design
-Development & Mass Production phase issue solving (design change)
-Concept development & validation(feasibility check是否较好?)
-Thorough knowledge in Product Design (mold, assembly, performance,regulation,
feasibility check)
-Good skill and speed in 3D Modeling & 2D Drawings
-Prepare the engineering product drawings with tolerance, spec. , assembly
guidance, secondary processing etc.
-OO & ## experienced(In XX project)
(OO & ## 在 XX专案中有过实作经验,但仍不熟悉,不知是否可以如此描述)
WORK EXPERINECE
Company Name :XX Industrial 2012/Oct ~ 2015/Oct
Designation :Design engineer
Company Profile:XX product manufacturer, OEM Domestic market share over XX%.
Oversea Customer Include XX,XX,XX,XX etc.
Project Undertaken:
(专案经历分为三项)
Independent design (Major design):
(主要想强调独立设计,是否有其他较好的描述方式)
-型号-种别
Collaborative Design:
(协同设计,协助设计)
-型号-种类
Development & Mass Production phase:
(开发&量产阶段)
-型号-种类
International Work Experience:
XX onsite design - USA,Michigan 2015/May ~ 2015/Jul
XX OO文件 signed - China,Shanghai 2014/Jun
另外如在国内与国外客户以视讯方式协助,是否可列在此项,有无较好的描述方式
以上,再麻烦各位版友们的协助了,感谢!
作者: allenh0728 (allen)   2016-07-04 15:26:00
有部分有问题 但是这是简历 不是自传 你的skills那边可以全部删掉然后换到你 experience的地方 这样有 context其他看起来有问题的地方不确定是不是错因为跟你不同科系上面说错 是 strength and ability不是 skills
作者: JamesHsuan (詹姆士瑄)   2016-07-05 04:42:00
这不是自传 是履历要改的地方太多了,建议先参考国外的履历改履历多用动词为开头 你很多句子都只是把一堆名词写出根本不是句子
作者: gentianpan   2016-07-05 21:34:00
精简到连冠词都没了,不用批啦。专业履历重精简,关键字要被数据库工具筛到,理工的,科技都走精简风。

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