打了2个问题，
不知文法或内容是否怪怪的(文不对题之类)，
就拜托大家帮我看看唷~
先谢谢拉~
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问题一：
What events in a person's life are most celebrated in your country?
回答：
Taiwanese people celebrate in many events.
When parents have a newborn baby in Taiwan, they will have a
small feast.
If getting married, couples will have a feast, too.
In my opinion, in Taiwan wedding and having a baby are most celebrated in a person's
life.

你打完有自己先看过一次吗？commerate? commemorate? " target="_blank" rel="nofollow">
"I mean, gifts are ..."这句也...Take myself as an example ...我觉得会比较好。第一段的结论来得有点莫名。[parents give pupils...]这边我觉得也应该要改一下...[If getting married, newlywed couples...] newlyedcouples 是已婚了> <,前面是将要结婚> <

1. 你的回答算是文不对题。问题问的是"most celebrated"，但是你的回答过于模糊/一般性。"General speaking"意思过于广泛(和most celebrated沾不上边)。commemorate 也无法表达"events ... most celebrated"的意思(不是mostcelebrated的events照样可以用commemorate来表示)。之后你“随便”举3个例子也于事无补

commemorate 及物动词... "with object"present / represent? " target="_blank" rel="nofollow">

感觉像是ibt的speaking