Re: [问题] 只有英文能力,下一步该怎么走

楼主: xavier2301 (薱阿拉高)   2023-10-25 16:41:57
※ 引述《peter98 (PyTorch AI套件烂死惹)》之铭言:
: 英文很好? 来
: Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend
: with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games
: or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things
: together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you
: prefer?
: Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
先写一篇350字的作文来看看 给你30分钟写
: 不允许使用拼字及文法检查软件(比如Grammarly或MS word内建拼字检查等)
Dear all,
It's difficult to compare which approaches I prefered. Life is about to
experience and you will never now when you are really in that situation.
When I was young, I could only heard from other people that how they
raised their children and it's not easy to imagine what it really looks
like.
If I have a child, I would prefer to spend most of my time with them.
Like the movie "Click", Adam spent almost his whole life time to
understand that the most precious and important thing in the world is
all about family.
This is real life not movie and we only live once. So, what will be my
answer for this.
Let me tell you, I will defitenely choose family.
Best regards,
Darkness
请老师帮忙批改,谢谢
作者: ipipwrong (Guess)   2023-10-25 17:21:00
这单字是巷口小二的英文补习班每周交一篇的作业吗?
作者: kria5304 (XenoMegaREENovaSaga)   2023-10-25 17:22:00
this is a pen
作者: GoGoJoe (gogojoe)   2023-10-25 17:30:00
"prefered" 应修正为 "preferred"。"now" 应修正为 "know"。"heard" 应修正为 "hear"。"If I have a child" 应修正为 "If I had a child"。"defitenely" 应修正为 "definitely"。
作者: tom91002 (皮皮)   2023-10-25 17:55:00
原po不是在外商工作吗?这英文能力…….
作者: kevinmeng2 (麻烦)   2023-10-25 18:01:00
真外国人,才没在关心文法…
楼主: xavier2301 (薱阿拉高)   2023-10-25 18:05:00
我英文真的不好,相较于我的同事..看到这篇文章想写写看,但脑中没什么想法,想到就写GOGOJOE大很厉害,我的文法很糟,都乱写
作者: peter98 (新兵)   2023-10-25 20:20:00
就国中程度用字的文章阿~ 文法都是简单的错~ 贴到M$ word都能帮你找一半问题出来,再去买个书学一下写作架构铺成,网络找文章也可以~大概就这样~中式英文的话就Adam spent almost ...那句最明显~但也没啥大问题,至少没有让中式英文造成意思的误会~欸回头再看一次,我想问你Adam spent almost后面动词你加to是知道少数情况spend后面确实可以加to而不是常用的Ving那句如果写Ving就错了,不过没看过电影的人应该不知道Ving是错的就是,但我好奇你你是不知道9成情况spend是加Ving还是真的知道spend后面有时可以加to-V XD补充一下,加to-V也是有点问题的,只是加Ving错更多~
作者: drajan (EasoN)   2023-10-25 20:48:00
自信心低落到要在网络上纠正别人英文…?smh
作者: GoGoJoe (gogojoe)   2023-10-25 21:56:00
一点也不厉害,我请chatgpt找的,所以我一直说学语文现在真的cp低。
作者: bms ( )   2023-10-25 22:02:00
现在回正式信都请用chatgpt 重写一次好吗免费软件不用还一直显示自己英文程度不好
作者: TERIYAKI (Trader in Wall St.)   2023-10-25 23:23:00
蛮多显而易见的文法错误 很中式英文 也像为写而写的作文
作者: s06yji3 (阿南)   2023-10-26 01:16:00
嗯...除了第一句话其他的内容跟题目无关欸。
作者: GoGoJoe (gogojoe)   2023-10-26 09:46:00
语文真的运用空间剩下口语了 要坐下来学还要花钱不划算如果是日常顺便学还可以
作者: charlie01   2023-10-26 10:44:00
这串文到底在干嘛 = =

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