https://imgur.com/mq4KMfW.jpg 这是我交作业之后老师的评语， 我只看懂第一行your journal is quite good 和最后一句I’d also think ... 请求看得懂的板友指教 题外话，有时候脑袋有顺利切换成英文脑就可以看草书顺顺看懂，有时候就完全是鬼画符 https://i.imgur.com/1t0wMtx.jpg
I’ve noted some places where you could be more specific or go further - esp in processesI’d also link (should be ‘like’?) to see you pick up on ideas from the ___ on the readings