不好意思因为自己怎翻都觉得怪怪的
想请教一下论文题目的翻译问题
中文为：
台日高等教育学生国际移动力之比较
国际移动力（global mobility)
英文试译：
1. A comparative study of students' global mobility in higher education
in Taiwan and Japan
2. A comparative study of global mobility of higher education students
in Taiwan and Japan
不知道怎么修改比较好呢
恳请各位指教 谢谢

A comparative study of global mobility between highereducation students in Taiwan and Japan

A comparative study between Taiwan and Japan: globalmobility in higher education 可多google参考别人