[请益] 写信询问的文法及用语

楼主: imjungyi923 (我是小旋风)   2019-01-23 18:52:26
如题
我要写信给交换的学校
问宿舍费用的汇款问题
想询问板友用词及文法是否合宜
重点就是
信里叫我们汇款受益人写自己的名字
但银行说不可能…
所以想问这是不是韩国特别的汇款制度之类的
Dear Office for International Affairs,
Hi, I'm XXX.
Today I went to the bank for dormitory fee ransfer but some questions arised.
In the letter you sent us said
""The "beneficiary" is yourself… ""
However, the bank teller refused to do this, and said the " beneficiary" shoul
d be the person who receives the payment. And our name should be written on r
emarks column.
Therefore, I want to ask whether it is the special kind of transfer in Korean
bnak, so I can tell the bank teller to do what you request.
Thank you for your help.
Best regards,
XXX.
麻烦大家了…
我英文就算多益金证书
但说写还是跟小学程度一样呜呜呜QWQ
作者: Doublehan (wickedhair)   2019-01-23 23:28:00
首先,我觉得开头不用hi;第一段的"t"ransfert好像不见了 最后面的bank拼反了,有些字挤一起阅读好困难…I was wondering whether it is a special kind of transfer system in Korean bank. If so, please provide me with some details, so I can tell the bank clerk to do what you requested.被切断了,请自行连接:) 建议最后一段改成这样且多加一句

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