“我很慢熟，但相处久了就会知道我的好”
我的翻译很直白：
I slowly make friends with others,but you will know thatI am nice ,then get al
ong with me.
请问要怎么改会比较不那么台式英文呢？
请求各位大大帮忙，谢谢你们。

intercourse是交媾（做爱）的意思耶，害大叔我脸都红了…

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疴......抱歉 我网络查的所以 我被误导了 对不起 囧不好意思，我重新自己打了一遍，还请教各位大大帮忙

I don't make friends quickly, but when you get toknow me, you will realize that I am a nice person.写得好像肥宅的心声(爆)

it takes a while for me to get familiar with people.if you are willing to spend more time with me,you will realize how nice i am.be willing to可省略

谢谢各位大大指教QQ 感激不尽！！！