有个老外说
He went down to the bar , sat down , and ordered a drink .
我是觉得应该改成 , sitting down , and ordering a drink .
请问我这样改可以吗?
如果是He went down to the bar, and sat down.你可以改成He went down to the bar, sitting down.这样的改法还蛮常见,用分词构句表连续动作。不过and连接三个词组,要改成分词构句的话,看起来会很奇怪,因为and是连接词,无法连接词性不同的单字、词组或子句