[请益] 求职应问自传求批

楼主: gd03 (闲散懒人)   2016-06-20 23:18:49
第一次写英文自传,想请教各位先进文法或语意上有没有什么问题。
第一段主要是想点出主要的专长在哪。
第二及第三段则是描述自己的经验。
第四段做个总结。
I am writing to introduce myself and inquire about
the opening of firmware and software engineer.
I have rich experience in firmware and application develop.
With more than 3 years, I develop and maintain payment devices.
I develop the firmware code with C programming language and
desktop application
with VB6.
I have experience in the firmware and driver develop like
UART, USB, SPI, I2C, interrupt, secure sensors and so on.
The develop and debug tool like JTAG, oscilloscope, logic analyzers,
signal monitor tool is common for me.
I also have the ability to read circuit diagram and
microcontroller specification. Hence, I can communicate with
hardware RD well and fix any unexpected issues in target board.
I’m able to develop device's application and desktop software.
I develop the device’s application to comply with
the EMV contactless specification.
For getting the VISA payWave contactless certification,
I develop the device's application and write test software on desktop.
I go to South Korea on business and
get the payWave certification in test lab.
I also conform the EMV contact Lv1 specification and
get certification in FIME laboratory.
I have confidence about communication skill with English.
Moreover, I can smoothly communicate with software RD.
I also know about the thinking difference between
the firmware and software develop.
I believe I can do the firmware and software job well.
I believe I am a great candidate for this job.
作者: mimi0254didi (餅乾)   2016-06-21 14:00:00
太多中式英文 我看第一段而已 develop 是动词你当名词用,建议你 去linkedin 看同专业的人 怎么打CV你也可以看到 他们的自我推荐信(某些会贴)driver develop => in the development of .....请人家帮你改吧 最快了 有翻译板 小钱而已而且全都是 简单句 I开头太多了

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