各位大师: (A) 请问我下列这段文字是否合乎我想要表达的语意?
问题是这样子的,我发现某篇文章里头有一个地方没有注意到,导致他下的结论太快,
但他的陈述依然是对的! 尽管他的证明([1, Theorem 3.1])有瑕疵,但他的证明过程依
然是有用的. 而我只是帮他的证明不足的地方给予补起来 (Theorem 2.7).
于是我写:
Note that there is a gap in the proof of [1, Theorem 3.1], that is, the case
s^2 = t is missed in the proof. Although we cannot apply the proof of [1,
Theorem 3.1] directly to prove Proposition 2.3, the part of the proof of
[1, Theorem 3.1] is still useful to verify Proposition 2.3. For this miss
case, we will give Theorem 2.7 to recover [1, Theorem 3.1].
谢谢各位的帮忙,万分感谢!!!
如果要改,请问应该怎么改?感恩~
(B) 另外问一个问题. 若我要说两个相同的椭圆.
我该写
equal elliptic discs
还是写
equally elliptic discs?
谢谢~