[求译] 请帮我看看自己翻的英文摘要

楼主: nomore (chasing car)   2014-08-19 18:26:06
以下是原文和自己挥汗翻的英文摘要
麻烦板上大大帮忙看一下是否okay....
一些太难的名词我翻不出来就略过了,不知道英文部分这样会不会翻的太简略?
感激不尽
原文:
本篇论文主要探讨台湾纪录片进入院线后,可能带来哪些革新动能,
相对的又必须面对与处理哪些关键问题。本文尝试深入分析这两种面向,
并使院线纪录片的论述能更加多元而不落入单一的批判视角中。台湾纪录片
从独立制作走向院线映演一个最大改变在于资本的注入,企业或机构的委制
案所带来的资金对于工作者的影片品质、工作条件与行销成本上都带来不少
利处。另外,对于一直缺乏收视人口的纪录片类型而言,院线映演的确能更
快速提升纪录片观众并建立观影习惯,后续引发的讨论也值得注意。但相对
而言,院线映演下的商业的逻辑不可避免的会与纪录片的核心价值相互牴触,
包括结构性问题的批判与揭露、纪录议题与观点的复杂度、纪录真实、纪录
伦理等问题。
翻译:
Adopting a new approach, the thesis focused on innovative forms
,changes and related issues emerging of documentary in contemporary Taiwan afte
film industry.Two major differences were shown. First, an increase in capital,
supported by businesses and institutions, greatly improve many ways of
documentary production. Second, documentary has been film genre that lacks
audience. Therefore, another effect of entering film industry is that it can
effectively appeal to more audience than it used to and develop documentary
viewing habits in viewers. Besides, the follow-up triggered also noteworthy.
However, the pursuit of commercial profits of cinema industry inevitably
contradicts to the core values of documentary. Numerous issues emerge,
including whether documentary in theater chain retain the documentary
nature of criticism and exposure.
原文:
在上述框架中笔者尝试以杨力州的文本为讨论范例,从外部策略与影像文本
更细致的分析纪录片在资本挪用下的能动性与困境进行分析。本论文将先关
注杨力州作品从初期到后期风格转变的成因,和其在院线纪录片的代表性为
何。杨力州的作品从初期的《我爱080》到近期的《被遗忘的时光》、《青
春啦啦队》等产生十分不同的产制与叙事差异。除了分析其外部行销与产制
,内部形式美学的革新外,也透过水蜜桃阿嬷事件的爬梳,指认纪录片与商
业结合下的伦理问题,并透过文本分析归纳出当纪录片太向商业倾斜,可能
导致类型化、去政治意识形态、温情主义、创作干预等种种问题。
翻译:
In the framework mentioned above, the author utilized Li-Jou Yang's
works as an example to analyze innovations and difficulties
documentary introduces and encounters in capital market. How his films,
such as “I Love (080)”(1999) from early stage appear different
from the later ones, such as “The Long Goodbye”(2010), “Young at
Heart: Grandma Cheerleaders” (2011) on the aspects of production
process and narrative. Besides, the author also analyzed the event of
"Honey Peach Grandma" to reveal several ethical issues of
documentary as it combines with businesses.
作者: wohtp (会喵喵叫的大叔)   2014-08-20 01:20:00
你的英文第一句是不是打错了?

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