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问，也专精在TOEFL机经(JJ)汇总整理，所以也可以叫我J2.
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以下正文开始：
今天再来看一篇作文的发展，其实整体来说都不错，但最后结束的地方，可以更好。
题目是：
Doctor Achebe
This week, we'll be discussing how technological advances are transforming
the job market, making some jobs unnecessary. Let's focus on government
actions. Suppose the government had to choose between two ways in which to
support people whose jobs are no longer needed. The government could either
give them enough money to live on until they find new jobs or offer them free
job training without giving them money directly. Which of these two solutions
do you think is better? Why?
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C同学回答：
From my perspective, I believe providing people with enough money to sustain
themselves until they find new jobs is the better approach. As Kelly points
out, financial aid can immediately assist them with their living expenses.
For example, Uncle Ku, one of my dad's friends, lost his job due to
technological advances. However, his savings could only support him and his
family for three months. Thanks to the financial aid from the government,
Uncle Ku was able to cover his child’s school tuition, ensuring that his
family did not have to go hungry. Therefore, he could focus on landing a new
job, without worrying about his family’s well-being due to his job loss.
Finally, after actively applying for jobs, he secured a position at an air
conditioning engineering company. As a technician, he wouldn't be easily
replaced by technology such as AI because we still require humans to identify
and resolve issues with air conditioning systems.
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前面发展都不错，讲到就是因为有政府的金援，所以即使没工作也不用担心学费还有生活
费，然后自己可以也可以专心找下一份工作。但是后面Finally提到说在努力的寻找工作
一阵子后，找到了一份技师的工作，不会再被取代了，这里感觉就比较跟前面没什么关联
，我建议同学应该要写的是反方的情况，譬如：
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没有政府的金援，可能就每天要烦恼小孩的学费、生活费从哪里来。在这样的情况下，就
算政府提供求职训练，也无法好好的上课、进修，训练的效果可能也会很差。
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Without government subsidies, one might find themselves daily worrying about
how to afford their children's education and living expenses. In such
circumstances, even if the government provides job training, it may be
challenging to fully engage in classes, potentially leading to subpar
training outcomes.
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如果不太知道最后几句怎么写，写“选择反方的情况”是很安全的一个选择，大家不妨试
试喔！
Cheers,
J2