[分享] 句子简化题FAQ Top 1 by J2

楼主: robert416 (萝卜)   2021-10-27 23:31:21
大家好,我是J2, 这篇文章要解析一个最近很常被问到的一题句子简化题。
几乎每个月都有同学问到,因此特别写这篇文章跟大家分享一下。
However, no group or species can maintain its dominance
indefinitely, and when, after over 200 million years, the age of
dinosaurs came to a dramatic end about 65 million years ago,
mammals began to flourish, evolving from relatively few types of
small terrestrial animals into the myriad of diverse species,
including bats and whales, that we know today.
首先,这种题目通常会是一句比较长的句子,所以建议把原句拆成两部分,
比较好理解,通常拆解两部分的原则是一个完整概念结束的地方,以这句来
说应该是:
1) However, no group or species can maintain its dominance
indefinitely.
2) and when, after over 200 million years, the age of dinosaurs
came to a dramatic end about 65 million years ago, mammals began
to flourish, evolving from relatively few types of small
terrestrial animals into the myriad of diverse species, including
bats and whales, that we know today.
简单翻译一下
1) 然而,没有任何物种可以永远的主宰地球。
2) 当恐龙时代经过两亿年后在六千五百万年前骤然结束,哺乳类开始繁盛
起来,从相对物种较少的小型陆地动物演化成好多物种,包含我们现今所知
的蝙蝠跟鲸鱼。
然后我们再来看看题目问什么:
Which of the sentences below best expresses the essential
information in the highlighted sentence in the passage?
题目问的是best expresses the essential information, 也就是答案叙述
不管再怎么改变、如何换句话说,核心、最重要的资讯是不可以拿掉的。
再看看附加的一句话:
Incorrect choices change the meaning in important ways or leave
out essential information.
错误的选项会“大大地改变句意、扭曲事实”,或是“漏掉其中一个大重
点。”
同学可以这样想,简单来说就是当我看完这个句子,在不逐字重述的情况
下,我要把这个句子重点“转述”给A听,当然不能改变扭曲原句的意思,
还有也不能漏掉大重点,相对不重要的细节可以省略。
也就是说,转述完给A听完之后,如果A再回头看原句,不应该有以下反
应:“刚刚这句子有讲到XXX这个重点, 你怎么没提到?”
大概了解这题目在考什么后,我们再回来看这题。
我们刚刚已经把这句拆成两部分:
1) However, no group or species can maintain its dominance
indefinitely.
2) and when, after over 200 million years, the age of dinosaurs
came to a dramatic end about 65 million years ago, mammals began
to flourish, evolving from relatively few types of small
terrestrial animals into the myriad of diverse species, including
bats and whales, that we know today.
也就是理论上来说,不管怎么换句话说,这两个部分都要有,缺一不可,如
果只提到其中一个部分,就算该部分全部重点都有提到,那话也只有讲一
半,仍然是个错误的选项。
同学们可以先试著作答看看,再往下看喔!
A) The dominance of dinosaurs came to an end 65 million years ago,
at which time mammals began to flourish and diversify.
B) Because no group of species can remain dominant forever, mammals
became the dominant group when dinosaurs became extinct.
C) After being the dominant group for more than 200 million years,
the age of dinosaurs came to a dramatic end 65 million years ago.
D) The diverse group of mammals that we know today, including bats
and whales, evolved from small terrestrial forms that had been
dominated by dinosaurs.
直接说这题同学最常选错的选项是A) The dominance of dinosaurs came to
an end 65 million years ago, at which time mammals began to
flourish and diversify. 同学一定会想说,这句话不就确实如原句所说,
“恐龙灭绝之后,就是哺乳类开始蓬勃发展并开始演化出多样化物种了”
吗?但是有没有发现一个重点没提到,就是我们一开始抓的第一句话“
However, no group or species can maintain its dominance
indefinitely.”所以A选项叙述即使“完全正确”,少了这个重点,就是
题干说的leave out essential information, 还是不能选的。
B选项是正确答案,但也是同学认为最有争议的地方,就是因为有个
because. 同学常会说“如果原句没有因果关系,看到答案选项有因果关系
一定错,直接删”,这句话基本上十之八九是没有错的,但这边刚好就故意
给你来一个“原句没有明显因果关系,但答案选项有because的。”
其实可以再仔细想一下,原句虽然没有直接的有because, since, now
that, so等等这种代表因果关系的连接词,但其实还时可以想想把因果关系
的字放进去,会不会不通顺,或是影响句意:
然而,“正因为”没有任何物种可以永远的主宰地球,“所以”当恐龙时代
经过两亿年后在六千五百万年前骤然结束,哺乳类开始繁盛起来,从相对物
种较少的小型陆地动物演化成好多物种,包含我们现今所知的蝙蝠跟鲸鱼。
把因果关系的字加上去,是不是发现好像意思也通顺,并且也没有改变句
意?
就算撇开因果关系不谈,B选项也绝对是比A更好的答案,原因是它有提到
no group of species can remain dominant forever, 呼应到原句
However, no group or species can maintain its dominance
indefinitely, 且后半的重点也有讲到,以这个题型来说,绝对是比A更好
的答案。
另外给同学一个小小tip, 原句的具体时间、举例通常都不太重要,选项如
果有,通常是错的喔!或者反过来说,正确的答案通常都不太会有时间、举
例这些细节,因为就算这些资讯没有讲到,也不会影响到该句最重要的资
讯。
所以有没有发现原句的after over 200 million years, the age of
dinosaurs came to a dramatic end about 65 million years ago, 答案
完全没有出现。
但也是跟上述的“看到因果关系就删”这概念一样,绝对不是百分之百喔,
同学千万不要解读成“只要有细节或是数字就错,”这样误会就大啦!
帮同学总结一下,这题非常具代表性,一次解决同学两个常犯的错:
1) 此题选答案的首要条件是原句的两个重点一定都要提到,缺一不可。
2) 非因果关系的句子,换句话说时可能还是可以用because.
之后做句子简化题时,不妨再把这题拿出来参考喔!
祝大家顺利
Cheers,
J2
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