[履历] 第二份工作自传求批(含英文自传)科技业

楼主: thegodofding (Ding)   2018-08-23 01:10:05
个人学经历背景: 国立大学学士
欲应征之职务: 科技业 工程师
自传履历内容:
爬了一些文 已经去掉很多不太重要的叙述
主要是英文自传的部分可能比较有问题
自传如下 还请各位大大帮忙提供建议 感谢
中文部分
﹝个人简历﹞
  我毕业于国立XX大学--机械与机电工程学系,个性开朗乐观,
喜欢循序渐进的处理问题。大学期间参加儿服相关的服务性社团,曾
担任社团的活动长及器材长,负责活动流程编列和内容筹划;以及器
材准备和点检等。
﹝工作经历﹞
  役毕后的第一份工作任职于台南的XXX公司--一间螺帽制造厂,
于公司内担任后制股的模具设计员一职。后制股负责的范围是螺帽成
型之外的所有加工制程,例如攻牙、车削及包装等的模具设计及技术
提供。于公司中负责的工作项目如下:
1.攻牙机模具设计:依照产品尺寸及外形设计模具。
2.多轴钻孔机模具设计:依照产品要求设计各轴加工动作及模具设计。
3.CNC/NC车床模具设计:依照产品尺寸及外形设计模具。
4.现场工程异常排除:提供测试计画或修改模具,协助现场排除异常。
5.包装材料BOM表资料建立:建立现场作业时之标准用料及包装资料。
6.新产品攻牙评估:新产品询价时评估攻牙可行性。
7.主管交办测试专案:验证产品特性能否符合标准、测试新产品之可行
性等。
﹝未来期许﹞
  在XXX公司近三年的时光,认识了很多资深的前辈,他们的经验之
深令人佩服。让我难解的问题,只要请教前辈们,总是能得到解决的脉
络。期许自己有朝一日能成为这样的人,在自己的专业领域中能畅所欲
言,面对问题时能够一语中的。
  我将以积极的心态面对每一件挑战,并将所学融会贯通,与贵公司
共同精进。恳请贵公司给我这个机会加入行列。
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英文部分
﹝Resume﹞
I graduated from the National XXX University with a bachelor’s
degree in Mechanical and Electromechanical Engineering. I am a
cheerful and optimistic person, and I tend to deal with problems
step by step to ensure that everything is on the track.
During the university, I participated in a volunteer club. I
have served as the leader of activity and director of tools & materials
of the club, responsible for the planing of activity process and
content planning, as well as equipment preparation and inspection.
﹝Work experience﹞
My first job was at XXX Corp., a manufacturer of steel nuts.
I worked as a mold engineer in the post-production department,
responsible for all processes except forming, such as tapping,
prevailing torque, turning and packaging. My jobs were as follows:
1.Mold designing of tapping machine : design the molds according
to the size and shape of the product.
2.Mold designing of drilling machine : set up each axis machining
action and design mold according to the product requirements.
3.Mold designing of CNC/NC lathe: design the mold according to the
size and shape of the product.
4.Troubleshooting of production line engineering exceptions: Provide
test plans or modify molds to solve the problem of the production line.
5.Establishing packaging parts BOM data: set up the standard of packaging
process.
6.Evaluating the feasibility of New product: evaluate the feasibility of
tapping when the new product is inquired.
7.Completing the projects assigned by manager: for example, verifying
whether the product characteristics meet the standards and testing the
feasibility of special parts.
[Summary]
I can always face every challenge with a positive attitude, and
integrate what I learn to improve myself with you. I hope your company
offer me this opportunity to join you.
英文自传是照中文翻过来的 不过英文的文法有一些真的不知如何表达
先谢谢大家了!
作者: aa06449 (要幸福)   2018-08-23 01:31:00
现在履历不是这样打的了
楼主: thegodofding (Ding)   2018-08-23 01:52:00
请问是指自传的格式还是PTT的格式?
作者: aa06449 (要幸福)   2018-08-23 02:11:00
等等我打一篇你的修改,但是详细内容还是要讨论
作者: Laoda245566   2018-08-23 02:26:00
条列式重点即可,大家不会看你这么多内容

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