大家好
最近在准备应征加拿大打工度假的工作
履历已经准备好了
但第一次写求职e-mail
不知这样是否妥当
再请各位先进帮忙过目与指正一下
Dear sir
My name is oo
I am writing to apply as a oo position which has been advertis
ed on oo webside.
About me
． Loving travel and have experience of working holiday in Japan.
． Have some experiences of being a guest service staff and tanslator.
． Native Chinese speaker
and be able to speaking Japanese,English and Taiwanese.
． Have positive attitude for doing tour guide,
hense I find myself quite be capable of doing this job.
More importantly, I am
．Hardworking
．A fast learner
．Empathetic
．Dedicated team member
．Have sence of humor
I have been dreaming of this job for years,
and therefore i applied a working holiday visa in Canada.
My application to work in Canada has been approved now, and my job in Japan wi
ll end in late August,
I am wondering if I can working in your company from September or November unt
il the end of winter season.
Thanks to taking time to consider my application
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
sincerely
oo

文法蛮多错误的，但我不知道此公司在不在意这件事情，也许你其他的经验对他们来说比较重要。看得出你很想要这份工作，建议你花钱去译者板找专业译者帮你修。

了解 谢谢你告诉我

这种形式好像不常见。你可以查查 cover letter/motivation letter 的范本模仿看看，然后做一份 resume/CV，附档在信件里面。内容的话，建议描述自己时可以多加一些证据或数字。例如你说自己学得很快，就可以举过去经验佐证例如几个月内从不会写程式到参与开发一个专案。宣称自己能说哪些语言，就附上考试成绩或者描述曾用那些语言进行的事也好（例如当过展场翻译之类）。还有尽量要把你的特质连结到你要申请的职位，不是只举一些套到什么职位都适合的好员工特质。例如工作认真就没什么必要讲，毕竟应该没有应征者会说自己不认真，除非你可以举出一些经验来说明你比一般人认真（自主进修之类的）。我个人认为以上原则基本达到后才要考虑英文问题，可以像一楼说的付费请专业的修。另外看到好几个基本文法和拼字这种用免费软件（如 Grammarly 免费版）就可以抓出来的错，自己先多检查几次，不然付钱请人帮挑这个好像有点浪费钱 XD

谢谢回应 我后来请朋友帮忙了果然还是要打点底子啊