XXXX and XXXX hereby jointly cordially
invite you to attend the first XXX international forum and
would like you to present opening remarks.
诚挚地邀请 您出席将举行之首届国际年会，并敬邀 您担任致词贵宾。
请问这样的英文ok吗？
举行除了hold take place 还有什么单字可以用？conduct好像离举办的意思有点差距。
谢谢回答。
XXXX and XXXX hereby jointly
invite you to attend the first XXX international forum and
would like you to present opening remarks with our sincerity.
将诚挚放在句尾这样读起来会不会很奇怪？
因为句首连用两个副词好像很累赘。
谢谢回答。