大家好,
小妹最近有一个工作面试,需要用英文自我介绍,
请问可否给我一些建议.
在此先谢谢大家^^
My name is XXX. Thank you very much for giving me a chance for an
interview.
I received a bachelor’s degree in chemistry from XXX University.
Aside from my major, I had studied Japanese in Waseda Japanese language
school and received a certificate of The Japanese Language Proficiency Test
Level 2.
I worked at family member’s company as an accounting assistant for one year.
Then I was employed in researching, calming and resolving client conflicts as a
customer service specialist and recommending, selecting and helping locate
merchandise based on customer needs and desire as a sales assistant for Merck
Ltd., Taiwan for eight momthes.
I possess strong language, communication and problem solving skills. Also I am
proactive and ready to learn anything needed.
I believe that my skills and experiences make me an excellent candidate for this
position.
Thank your for your time and attention. I welcome any questions or comments
you might have.

现在的伸手牌真的愈来愈多了…

不好意思,请问Ar大伸手牌是指...?

没事没事…我以为这里是许愿池别介意^^||

写得不错。

Then那一整句 后半部(and rec...months)要不要独立写成一句? 并且先讲职称名sales assistant再说工作内容 我是感觉原本写法念起来太长太平(当然我不是你

你是要用讲的 而不是写作文给面试官看 我觉得用短句好正在想as先写 就看到k有回了 推kai我觉得一直重复用三个词(A, B & C)有点烦躁..(个人偏见另内容嫌少 可能就两分钟吧... 多加点各方面介绍吧

谢谢Kai大和Buch大的建议,我把customer service 和sales assistant分两句,其实我也觉得都用A,B&C很乏味我把sales assistant放前面,后面接的句子改用not onlybut also的句型. 人事说只要简单的自我介绍就好,所以我想长度1~2分钟应该ok,真的非常感谢大家给我的建议^^