[请益] 因为要考研究所,自己英文弱,求帮修改

楼主: mm111113 (ntntc)   2014-10-07 20:48:26
学生xxx,生长于南投县,毕业于屏东科大学,家庭成员有爸爸、妈妈,还有二位弟弟
。爸爸任职彰化县慈爱教养院为身心障碍者职业重建个案管理员,妈妈为美发师。
因为喜欢服务,所以选择社会工作。在大三实习期间,接触到身心障碍者与早期疗育的孩
童,在服务过程上,产生兴趣,他们没有放弃自己,让我对服务又燃起热忱。现今在正向
行为协会工作,招生、行政处理与协助团体。在团体里面,陪伴个案,纾解他们的情绪,
不要让他们有负面的思考,帮助他们找到自己。
My name is xxx From Nantou. I graduated from National Pingtung University
and my major was in social work. There are 4 people in my family. My father
is a vocational rehabilitation counselor, and my mother is a hairdressers.
Because I like the service, so I chose social work in college. During junior
internship exposure to persons with disabilities and early intervention of
children in the service process.they did not give up, let me service has
kindled enthusiasm. today ,I work in . At work enrollment, administrative
processing and assistance organizations. In the group inside, accompanied by
case, to relieve their emotions and help them find themselves.
What is your motivation?
1. 弟弟曾经是学习障碍,压力大而离开人世,自己赋予自己使命,要帮助类似的人
2. 长期看到父亲在服务,受到极大的薰陶
3. 自己在大三实习过程上,发现喜欢身障者的纯真,以及他们的努力,想要在服务过程
中,提供他们更好的。自己想要让兴趣跟职业结合,
1 . Brother is learning disabilities, pressure and passed away, I
wanted to help people like
2. long-term to see my father in the service, were greatly edified
3. I was in junior internship process, found innocent of disabled persons, as
well as their efforts. I want the services to provide them better. I want to
combine interests and career
谢谢各位
作者: Lance0616 (风翼)   2014-10-07 22:01:00
There are five people in my family.请多做点功课...你先去屏东科技大学用英文版看中文有些地方语法有点奇怪
作者: Archangel585 (真‧大天使五八五)   2014-10-07 22:32:00
自己的功课自己做…帮忙不是这样帮低…
作者: bluecadence (Maxwell's demon)   2014-10-07 23:10:00
花点钱找人帮忙写英文稿吧。光看英文还真的看不懂。
作者: Xa73 (Anonymous)   2014-10-08 02:09:00
市场价一字1~5元不等
作者: aaronjet (深海鱼)   2014-10-08 10:05:00
光是because 后面加so,就很有问题了,
作者: kee32 (终于毕业了)   2014-10-08 11:19:00
这种英文要砍掉重练了,为你自己好。高一程度可能都不到…
作者: skyflyer03 (天空飞行者)   2014-10-08 12:29:00
原po我等等有空时~ 帮你看喔
作者: wohtp (会喵喵叫的大叔)   2014-10-08 21:44:00
我觉得连中文原文都大有问题 -_-
作者: kee32 (终于毕业了)   2014-10-08 22:23:00
帮之足以害之
作者: LaPAELLA (西班牙)   2014-10-10 19:00:00
中文...
作者: kkben (多想一步)   2014-10-11 07:29:00
我倒觉得改几处文法结构问题 即可

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