You also have one of the best institution on communicable disease control -
CDC and many more top experts on epidemic control. Then, how terrible your
country deal with this conovir-19 pandimic . You have the most patients and
deaths in the world. Only one week ago your President Trump still keeps
saying mask is useless and during the predential campaign not to ask
supporters to wear masks. More recently, he urges schools to open and asks
students back to schools. All we know this will end up more kids get infected
without symptom and bring virus back to familys and sociaty. During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 out break, we closed the class with two cases and close the entire
school if more than two classes closed. We effectively subdued the
epidemic. Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
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and many more top experts on epidemic control.
相关一流专家更不可数
=..= 懂了吧 什么叫做 许多更加顶尖的流行病控制专家
真的看不懂啊..
how "terribly" your country "dealt" with this conovir-19 pandimic.
时态
感叹词强化句 原句:Your country "dealt" with this conovir-19 pandimic terribly.
你得用副词 因为你是形容这个行为 这个举动 不是用形容词
You have the most patients and deaths in the world.
问题我提过了 你的YOU一开始明明都是指部长本人 一下子变成了美国
就好比 我们不会问陈时中说 "你"现在有多少病患正在住院的?
而是说 "你们"现在多少病患正在医治中?
看了会错乱...会有 到底在供三小的感觉 你到底想跟谁讲话!?
Only one week ago your President Trump still "kept"
saying "wearing a" mask is useless and during the predential campaign "didn't"
ask his supporters to wear masks.
第一 时态
第二 要嘛 就是指行为 戴口罩 要嘛就是指口罩 "the" mask is useless
第三 既然你用了对等连接词 一边是用动词 过去形态 KEPT 另一边怎么用 不定词
完全是错的 not to ask !? 国中生都知道 AND=对等连接词 一边怎么用
另一边也怎么用
More recently, he "urged" schools to open and "asked" students back"".
第一 时态
第二 前面己经明讲学校了 后面提到学生回去 就不用再提了
他强迫学校开门接着要求学生回去"学校"<===这两字就可以省略了
All we know this will end up more kids get infected without symptom and
bring virus back to familys and sociaty.
...
All we know this will end up more kids infected than ever
with no symptom and virus to their own families and our society.
第一 一个句子只有一个动词(扣掉连接词 and or 等等的) 这是文法书第一章的内容
你有END了 自然没有 get 照理说 getting infected OK 但是多此一举
就用 infected 就够了
第二 symptom是可数名词 然后你用without 最好用 any 对 without any symptom
照理说 and bring virus back to familys and sociaty.
bring 跟 end 搭OK 但是以英文的语法 是不是 bring 跟end 太远
容易会让人会错意 对不对 所以囉 我的句子 基本上同义 但是比较好
他的原句"这将造成更多年幼者成为无症状感染者，将病毒带回家庭及社区"
他的"将病毒带回家庭及社区" 主词 懂中文的都知道 不是指"这" 而是指"年幼者"
所以说他的BRING本身就不是跟END搭 我的句子就比他更好一些了嘛 对不对
第三 familys and sociaty (families and our society.)
第四 more kids infected than ever 今天你用了MORE 意思是指更多的
大家都懂 就要跟than 之类的搭 (campared with之类的)
所以就最简单的 THAN EVER = 比以往更... 比以往更多小孩被感染
During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 out break, we closed the class with two cases and close the entire
school if more than two classes closed.
......................
我还去查了中文 因为我真的看不懂
在2009-11年H1N1大流行时，台湾只要每班二人确诊，则关班；有二班关班，
则关闭学校
During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 "outbreak", we closed one class with two cases to occur and "closed"
the entire school after more than two classes met with the same condition.
第一 outbreak
第二 时态
第三 用IF 你就要用助动词 WILL WOULD 等等的 用AFTER就不用
第四 单纯美化啦 一直CLOSE CLOSE 最多两个啦 (除非你要搞一些文学用法
We effectively subdued the epidemic.<===终于有一句算OK的了
Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
Taiwan is regarded "as" one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
第一 中式英文 台湾"被"认为"是" 控制H1N1的最佳者之一
喔~~~被动式不是要加BE动词吗? "是"不就是 "is" 她是玛莉 She is Mary
唉呀 是用as啦
Many people around the world know Mr. Trump is nuts. <==ok
So, if I were you, I
will resign as Secretary as HHS here in Taiwan to put pressure on Mr .
Trump to do and say things correctly.
我哭了...
So, if I were you, I "would" resign the Secretary of HHS here in Taiwan to put
pressure on Mr.Trump to do and say things correctly.
第一 假设语气
第二 我知道为什么他一直用as as 因为他不懂单字 why? resign=辞职 assign=派命指派
我任命tom 当美国卫生及公共服务部部长 I assign Tom as the Secretary of HHS.
懂了吧 任命指派是用assign 是搭as 但是 resign是指辞职 然后就很白话直接
我辞去这个工作 I resigned this job... SIGH~"~ 我不知道要说什么了
To do this not only save American lives and
economy. the whole world will also benefit from this doing.
To do this not only "saves" American lives "but"
economy. the whole world will also benefit from this doing.
第一 三单
第二 我想 国中生就知道 NOT ONLY...BUT(ALSO) 还有 BOTH...AND
所以 我也不知道该说什么了@"@...
总而言之
我才说 完全不行 真的完全不行
八成以上都有问题...
如果今天是学生就算了
但是呢
偏偏是正式公开的信件喊话
所以说 我第一眼看...
我看不懂 我还必须以推理的方式 推敲人家要讲什么 然后 为什么会犯错...
many more top experts<=====我真的看不懂...=..="a
ORZ...
我的天啊...
喵=w=