不好意思
看得有点难过
As Confucius said, it is such a pleasure to have friends coming from afar.
Welcome to visit Taiwan. May I introduce myself. I served as Minister of
Health here in Taiwan from 2009-11. I have no intention to share what I did
as Minister of Health with you now. What I like to say is your country have
many best schools of medicine and schools of public health such as University
of Michigan where I get my PHD.
I have no intention to share what I did as Minister of Health with you now.
这句话会让人感觉 你是现在有在当吗?
(虽然前面你有讲09-11 还有会误解 看看那个NOW...对不对
I have no intention to share what I did as the Minister of Health in the past
with you.
或者
I have no intention to share what I did as the former Minister of Health
with you.
..........
What I like to say is your country have many best schools of medicine
and schools of public health such as Universityof Michigan where I get
my PHD.
这句有两个以上的主动词 IS 跟 HAVE 稍微改一下
What I like to say is your country having many best schools of medicine
and of public health in the world such as University of Michigan where I got
my PHD.
没什么啦
那个MANY BEST 是有看过啦 但是都是 那种 闲聊文
I HAVE MANY BEST FRIENDS!!!
我不常见到啦
..............
You also have one of the best institution on communicable disease control -
CDC and many more top experts on epidemic control. Then, how terrible your
country deal with this conovir-19 pandimic . You have the most patients and
deaths in the world. Only one week ago your President Trump still keeps
saying mask is useless and during the predential campaign not to ask
supporters to wear masks. More recently, he urges schools to open and asks
students back to schools. All we know this will end up more kids get infected
without symptom and bring virus back to familys and sociaty. During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 out break, we closed the class with two cases and close the entire
school if more than two classes closed. We effectively subdued the
epidemic. Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
首先 你在跟美国卫生部长讲话
你的文章的的传达对象是他嘛... 那么
但是 文章感觉你的传授错误
why?
You have the most patients and deaths in the world.
这个you 应该不是指部长 应该指美国吧
对... 有时指部长 有时指美国本土 就有错乱的感觉
啊~剩十分
只能稍微看一下啦
Only one week ago your President Trump still keeps
saying mask is useless and during the predential campaign not to ask
supporters to wear masks.
Only one week ago your President Trump still kept
saying wearing mask is useless ,and during his predential campaign not to ask
the supporters to wear masks.
...........
More recently, he urges schools to open and asks
students back to schools. All we know this will end up more kids get infected
without symptom and bring virus back to familys and sociaty.
时态啦...
More recently, he urged schools to open and asked
students back to schools.
All we know this will end up more kids infected
with no symptom and virus back to families and society.
啊...
先这样 时间不够
就整个看起来很难懂 很难过啦~"~
Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
...........
三小啦~"~
剩一分钟 来不及改了
喵=w=