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KoreaGG (去去武器走)
2015-05-02 02:29:26※ 引述《prompter (Qu)》之铭言：
: 这是我看完前三章的一些修改建议
: 请再给我一点时间看完后面章节
: This is some of the proposed changes and suggestions before chapeter 3.
: Please give me a some time to read the following chapters.
: 想写出我中文的意思
: 但英文文法似乎有点混乱
: 不晓得可以怎么修?
: 希望有高手可以帮忙QQ
这是我看完前三章的一些修改建议
请再给我一点时间看完后面章节
This is some of the proposed changes and suggestions before chapeter 3.
Please give me a some time to read the following chapters.
建议
Here's attached with a few advices after l finished the previous chapters 1-3.
I need more time to go through the rest.