#新制写作高分原则
#什么是例子具体展开
大家好，我是SK2冲刺班顾问Chris:D
最近在我们顾问时间中练习的新制写作，大家会发现，有做到"development"的、且切题
的文章，都不会低于3分。
Development是指例子展开中的发展，它必须要有以下原则：具体、清楚、关联。
为了让大家方便了解例子发展，我们用1题来做举例：
Should governments invest more money on economy or education? (你觉得政府要花
大量资金在经济发展还是教育?)
同学的立场是政府应要花钱在education, 并且提供了一个清楚的理由：Education can h
elp build confidence in individuals.
在英文中，主题句后方要有例子支持，大家可以看完这个段落，去思考这个例子有没有Ch
ris说的原则：具体、清楚、关联～
For example, Taiwanese government value the development of education, and it p
rovi
des individuals with the necessary knowledge and skills to navigate life's cha
llenges, giving them the confidence to succeed. It is a important policy that
encourages people to pursue their goals and fully explore their ablities.
这样的写法，没有办法让考官清楚知道，为什么可以 navigage life challenge, succee
d 什么， explore 什么能力。这样的段落就会太抽象(too abstract)，很有可能拿不到3
分的。
在我们冲刺班word bank的建立下，首先要去思考的是“build confidence”的具体过程
。你的 word bank可能会有：
自信能在硕士班写论文时学会： critical thinking and problem-solving skills, con
tribute to personal growth, think logically
自信能在化学课做实验学会：learn from failure and focusing on the positive rath
er than the negative
自信能在课堂报告学会：look people in the eye and speak with a firm and steady
expression
有没有发现 "development" 的意思即：“我不要用主题句的字，但是能表达build confi
dence 具体过程的概念。”
或者，你也可以想想看自信的人会说出："I know I can do it!" 的那种画面 xD
所以我的具体回答可能会像这样：
For example, students can cultivate their critical thinking and problem-solvin
g skills by writing a master's thesis. Through research and analysis, they lea
rn to evaluate evidence and think logically, contributing to their personal gr
owth. Moreover, when doing experiments in a chemistry class, students are enco
uraged to reflect on their mistakes, learn from them, and focus on the positiv
e results of the experience. In some classes, numerous presentations can help
students learn to make eye contact and speak with a firm and steady expression
. Overall, education can not only allow people to gain new knowledge but to de
velop a positive mindset and increase their self-confidence.
观察完以上段落跟刚刚示范的第一段，有感受到差别在哪里吗～“具体展开”是一个26-3
0分的关键，希望大家今天有学会喔！
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