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撷取重点：
上周Joyce老师面谈时，满多同学们写独立写作的，
今天，小编把这些同学的作文贴出让大家看看这些主题句是否合乎英文主题句的规则。
首先，我们来了解一下，英文写作里，一个段落里的第一句 - 主题句应该要注意的具备的
条件。
主题句必须一定要有：
1. A topic sentence must be a complete sentence.
2. A topic sentence is usually a clear and direct statement.
3. The subject of the topic sentence is usually the subject idea of the
paragraph.
4. The verb of the topic sentence usually shows the focus of the paragraph. So,
it usually presents a judgment or attitude about the subject.
我们再拿上周的作文题目
题目:
In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the
subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects
with a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering
even if they are interested in other subjects.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
这个题目里的people很清楚，就是students.
所以，同学在写主题句的时候，要以students 为发想的对象。题目想要论证的地方就是您
是否同意学生需要拿跟工作进展快速的相关课程即使该学生的兴趣是在其他的课程。
这个题目，正面跟反面各有同学写。我们来一起看一下同学们的主题句是否合乎英文作文里
主题句的条件。
立场为”Agree”的主题句
1. learning subjects with fast growing careers is the crucial factor for
students to get a job after they graduate from the university.
他是一个完整的句子，非问句。他有清楚的陈述句，且这句话的主词students who learn
subjects with fast growing careers就是整个段落要谈的主题。
他的动词带有一个”态度=> is crucial。
2. learning subjects with fast job growth provides students with plenty of
resources for their studying.
他是一个完整的句子，非问句。他有清楚的陈述句，且这句话的主词learning subjects
with a fast job growth就是整个段落要谈的主题。
他的动词带有一个”态度=> provides resources。
立场为”Disagree”的主题句
3. students are competitive in the job market if they choose the subjects which
they are interested in.
他是一个完整的句子，非问句。他有清楚的陈述句，且这句话的主词students就是整个段落
要谈的主题。他的动词带有一个”态度=> are competitive。
4. Choosing the courses students are interested in could enlighten their future
career.
他是一个完整的句子，非问句。他有清楚的陈述句，且这句话的
Choosing the courses students are interested in就是整个段落要谈的主题。
他的动词带有一个”态度=> enlighten future career。
所以，同学在思考怎么下笔主题句时，要记得这四项规则唷！
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