大家好，我是SK2的Rosa，
同学常常在练托福写作时，会出现一样的文法错。
如果你对文法没有什么信心，建议你做完以下练习之后，把最常犯的问题记
起来，就能够避免大部分的文法错了。
首先，请你把以下题目印下来，并且试着找出每个题目里面的文法错。
1. There is a large number of toads, they can easily prey on the
flies.
2. Young people have the ability of thinking independently, which
helps them make their decisions.
3. Agnostids are not seafloor dwellers due to fast moving and
spread widely on the seafloor.
4. Most of the people in ancient times had limited choices.
5. Agnostids should have developed some special organs, but
without evidence to prove.
6. And then, John went to the ceremony.
7. I am easy to reach a decision.
8. There were many users provided a large amount of information
about their academic experience.
9. They lacked interest about the major.
10. The creatures have a large population and it will cause the
death of the host.
接下来，请看参考拟答和解释。
1. There is a large number of toads, so they can easily prey on the
flies.
英文里，两句话的中间需放连接词或是转折词。如果没有，这会是run-on
sentence的问题。
2. Young people have the ability of thinking independently,
helping them make their decisions.
SVO, which VO.的句型里面，修饰语只能够修饰最靠近的受词，无法修饰到整件事。
当你想要表达整件事，需要用分词构句：SVO, Ving.
3. Agnostids are not seafloor dwellers since they move fast and
spread widely on the seafloor.
Due to 后面只能够加名词。如果要表达动作的话，建议用SVO, since SVO.
句意会更清楚。
4. Most people in ancient times had limited choices.
这里不用使用the，因为是指以前的人，并非指一小群人。
The只有在限定时，才会使用。
5. Agnostids should have developed some special organs, but there
was no evidence.
but 前后需平行，因此，后面应改成子句。
6. Then, John went to the ceremony.
And须连接两句话，如果And放在句首，会犯fragment的问题。
把And拿掉，只留下Then，整句话就没有问题了。
7. It is easy for me to reach a decision.
同学常常会写出I am easy, people are difficult的句型。
有些特定的字眼是修饰整件事情的，例如:easy, difficult, convenient, important。
此时，应使用虚主词来指代整件事。
8. Many users provided a large amount of information about their
academic experience.
一句话里面有两个动词。建议同学少用There is N.的句型，因为当你使用这个句型时
，很容易会犯两个动词的问题。
9. They lacked interest in the major.
搭配词使用错误。be interested in…不会是be interested about。
10. The creatures have a large population and they will cause the
death of the host.
误用代名词：当你用it的时候，会指代不到对象。改成They，便能够指代到主词的
creatures，句意会更清楚。当你不会使用代名词时，建议你可以直接重复提到
指代的对象。此外，使用代名词时，应该问自己，指代的对象是否清楚？
前面是否提到？
统整上述的十大常见文法错：
1. Run-on sentence
2. 关代修饰错误
3. Due to用法错误
4. 限定/非限定概念不清楚
5. But 前后没平行
6. Fragment
7. 句型用法错误
8. 一句话里面有两个动词
9. 搭配词使用错误
10. 误用代名词
接着，请同学再做以下练习，看这次你是否能够做对！
1. Her parents came back from work, she felt much better.
2. The creatures moved from one place to another, which shows that
they could have moved fast.
3. I decided to learn some special dishes, such as how to make beef
noodles and how to produce steam lobsters.
4. The animals will move from the area to the other very quickly.
5. The animals had tiny eyes and even be blind.
6. So, we found a great deal of fossils.
7. People are hard to express their love towards their family.
8. Animals lived on the seafloor did not have the ability to move
fast.
10. My friends will share their personal experience to me.
11. It ruled out the possibility that the animals were predators.
最后，请看参考拟答，这次是否有全部作对呢？
1. Her parents came back from work, and she felt much better.
2. The creatures moved from one place to another, showing that they
could have moved fast.
3. I decided to learn some special dishes, such as beef noodles and
steam lobsters.
4. The animals will move from one area to another very quickly.
5. The animals had tiny eyes and were even blind.
6. Thus, we found a great deal of fossils.
7. It is hard for people to express their love towards their family.
8. Animals which lived on the seafloor did not have the ability to
move fast.
9. My friends will share their personal experience with me.
10. This evidence ruled out the possibility that the animals were
predators.
延伸阅读：
1. 十大常见的写作文法错误
http://sk2toefl.blogspot.com/2013/08/blog-
post.html
2. 我的文法很差，该怎么办？
http://sk2toefl.blogspot.com/2013/09/blog-post_30.html
祝同学都能够越写越有信心！
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