[分享] SK2 Rosa-这周三直播讲解托福作文

楼主: SKTWORosa (SK2Toefl Rosa)   2018-04-23 23:10:21
[直播预告-托福作文跟GMAT/GRE有什么不同?]
大家好,我是SK2的Rosa,
很多同学在念托福时,总会觉得疑惑为何自己作文认真写了,却拿20初头的
成绩?而同学常常想说,可能是想理由不够快,打字速度不够快,再努力准
备就好了,但是你的作文成绩很可能都是因为你不够了解托福写作的缘故。
其实,托福作文,从21要到28分,是"一念之间",一个观念改变,导致写法
改变,就能够做到了。而我认为写作绝对是四科里面CP值最高,最好提升的
一科。
因此,Rosa将于这周三和同学分享托福写作如何写?让你托福直接多3-7分。
我辅导过非常多名同学考到写作高分,
“大推Rosa的1~6逻辑!用1-6逻辑写,什么题目都可以有条理、有内容的
写到一定字数。”—silentlawyer
“上了Rosa的课最大的收获是写作速度变得非常快,搭配顾问时间的练习,
后期大约可以在25分钟内写完,5分钟检讨。”—yvonne226
而托福写作其实并不难,重点在于你是否懂托福写作在考什么?你是否看得
出一篇作文好坏?
这次先给同学一篇作文(置于文末),请同学思考里面的问题,当天再收看这次的直播,
相信能够让你对托福写作豁然开朗喔!
如果你想要听听我的分享,只要加入SK2 TOEFL社团,并且在周三(4/
23)晚上六点准时打开SK2 TOEFL社团,就可以看到这次的直播分享囉!有
任何写作问题也欢迎你于脸书留言,相信这样的方式,能够最有效地帮助你
解决问题。
Warm Regards,
SK2 Rosa ^____^
此篇作文的题目是Cooperative ability is more important than leadership.
请同学找找看各段的问题喔!你认为这篇作文能够拿几分?赶快来挑战看看!
People often possess different perspectives on the issue whether
cooperative ability is more important than leadership. As for me,
I strongly contend that cooperative ability is indeed more essential
than leadership.
First of all, people place emphasis on the outcome, and good
cooperation can bring about positive results. For instance, when I
was preparing for mid-term exam in college, I was extremely scared
about economics. In addition, to defeateconomics, I grouped a
study team. Then, we cooperated on different topics of economics
and discussed the problem we met. Consequently, we all got high
score on the exam. However, if I studied on my own, I might not
have dealt with the difficulties I met. Hence, I might have failed
on the test.
Secondly, efficiency is the key for people to finish their job and
cooperative ability can save lots of efforts and time. For
example, when my father worked for the Taiwanese government ten
years ago, he always had difficulties proposing a new work plan
for the coming years. As a result, he worked overtime every week
to deal with it. However, when he started to work in collaboration
with others, he found that it is much easier for him to draft a
practical plan. To elaborate, he could have a brainstorming
session with others and therefore spark new inspirations. Besides,
he could discover his blind spots more easily by discussion and
hence avoid potential mistakes. Obviously, cooperation benefited
him so much that he no longer worked overtime.
Last but not least, the teamwork between nations provides each
other with advantages.For example, in 2011, Japan experienced a severe
earthquake, and this disaster left thousands of people dead and damaged
a great number of buildings. When the tragic news spread out, the
Taiwanese government volunteered to contribute big money and
resources to aid victims. Therefore, Japanese show more respect to
Taiwan, and Japanese had sufficient capital to rebuild homeland. On the
contrary, if Taiwanese government keeps silent without any action, the
Taiwanese might get less help when encountering difficulties.
In conclusion, since people are sometimes in need of others, it is
significant for people to cultivate the cooperative ability.
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作者: earnest (大卫)   2017-04-23 23:10:00
推!
作者: dearamelia (Lia Hsu)   2018-04-24 00:40:00
推柔纱直播!
作者: pinghang (d d)   2018-04-25 22:18:00
推!好棒!超赞!

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