[分享] 写作28分享

楼主: jinguo (想厝的心情)   2016-07-28 14:59:53
考到W28(GG)我不意外,因为我作文练20-30篇。
写到后来,整合写作真的都会背了。
因为有板友站内信询问,我就干脆分享出来。
我的写作就是跟着送佛Karen老师跟Austin 老师给的建议写的
Austin说独立写作最重要就是审题。不能离题。不能偏题。主题句要明显清楚点出来理由。
例如以下的题目。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more
important than studying hard in school.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
我会解读成这样。
关键字: success in job => relate well to people=> agree?
所以,我的立场是
立场: Agree
理由一: more opportunities in job promotion
理由二: greater business development
然后,我的第一段就会变成
Although….., I believe…. .
The reason is that…1..In addition, ...2...
Hence, I agree/disagree with the statement that….
Although it is very important for students to study hard, I believe that
knowing more people to expand the network is more vital than studying. The
reason is that knowing more people, especially professionals bring more
opportunities in job promotion. In addition, having wider network benefits in
business development. Hence, I agree with this statement that for success in a
future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than
studying hard in school.
Body 段落,就是要解释理由。所以我通常会直述理由,再用一句加以解释理由。第三句就
开始讲例子。通常例子是否丰富就是得分的关键,所以,我宁可写两段body好好的交代清楚
我的内容,而非三段。
First, relating well to people is a great skill to learn because one could
stand out easily in the job field. That is to say having better skills in
managing people is more crucial to one’s career than academic studying. For
example, Mark is a social person who knows how to interact with people, while
Sean is shy. Both of them were my college friends. After graduation, he got a
job in a multinational company and six months later, he became a project leader
in the company. His boss saw his capability in terms of communication and
coordination, so he got more opportunities to prove himself at job. On the
other hand, Sean performed as well as Mark in school. However, he is shy and
doesn’t like to hangout with people. Though he also worked in the same
company, he didn’t have equal chance to be promoted due to his personality.
In addition, expanding wider network can be beneficial to the business
development. In other words, having a good ability to relate to people is very
essential for someone who hopes to be an entrepreneur. For example, Tony Chen,
a famous investment expertise in Taiwan, has very good relationship with other
people in his community, so he has a lot of opportunities to persuade many of
them to invest in his fund pools. Though he didn’t have very good academic
performance, he could still gather much money and earn lot from people he know.
Today, he is one of the richest people in Taiwan by only managing financial
investments.
我的结论段,就是将我的首段在换句话说一下而已。
In conclusion, based on the above reasons, I believe that the ability to relate
well to people is more important than studying hard in school due to the
benefits of having more opportunities in job advancement and business
expansion. Therefore, I agree with this statement that people will be more
successful if they relate to people well than studying in school.
因为第一段跟最后一段实在是写太多遍了。所以,对于句型结构我很熟练。考试时,我都是
先写中间两段的内容发展,然后在回来写前后段。时间上面的分配,我会大概都先花5分钟
构思,不会马上看到题目就拼命打字,以免自己想的不够周全,写到一半又要改。
中间整个内容大约我会花20分钟拼命写,不会去管打字或者文法的问题。
最后的5分钟,我会将我的文章重读一遍,将所有的句子顺过去。确认没有typo也没有简单
的文法错误。
文章已长,整合写作,下次分享。
先祝大家考试顺利!
作者: Mydick ( 醉拳甘Mydick)   2016-07-28 15:03:00
好文,推!
作者: momopipi (累累)   2016-07-28 15:09:00
推 想看整合 每次FG都是整合写不好
作者: leov72   2016-07-28 15:21:00
作者: sosophia (苏苏非亚)   2016-07-28 16:37:00
作者: yeyuiang   2016-07-28 19:00:00
好文 推 谢谢:)
作者: mirrow0311 (十元豪捧油)   2016-07-28 19:21:00
推~
作者: anper (镜中人)   2016-07-28 23:30:00
谢谢分享
作者: calvadosa (卡巴)   2016-07-29 00:39:00
谢谢分享
作者: oasisrose (life goes on)   2016-07-29 01:06:00
呜呜整合please
作者: esther730 (esther)   2016-07-29 01:47:00
作者: devilhades (菲特)   2016-07-29 10:32:00
作者: bobhuang   2016-07-29 11:44:00
作者: rodney0520   2016-07-29 12:22:00
推推 谢谢分享!
作者: cyclopentane (cyclopentane)   2016-07-29 12:27:00
1,4 段这样不会被觉得redundancy吗?
作者: clementine54 (Caroline)   2016-07-29 17:33:00
谢谢分享!
作者: bruce00595 (阿蒲)   2016-07-29 20:16:00
thanks a lot!
作者: tsuchan49 (Alice)   2016-07-29 21:56:00
感谢分享!一直觉得写作是罩门 曾听老师说不可以用到"I, my"之类的字眼 所以在举例时常常卡住……知道就算用了还是可以拿高分就放心些了 赶快来练一篇!!
楼主: jinguo (想厝的心情)   2016-07-30 09:33:00
有听过最好用第三人称来写。不过那个应该是GRE或者GMAT吧
作者: EZ0928 (傲熊)   2016-07-30 10:06:00
用心推 tsuchan49 其实就我考试经验 是没关系的 I, my 的例子也是可以的哦!!!
作者: johnse5533 (Clive)   2016-07-30 10:26:00
作者: TommyCheng (汤汤)   2016-07-30 21:19:00
推!好文
作者: bing9908131 (BY)   2016-07-31 18:18:00
推!!
作者: cuteVictor (Victor)   2016-08-03 14:33:00
感谢分享
作者: goodah (好啊)   2016-08-03 14:41:00
作者: evelyna (evelyna)   2016-08-05 03:07:00
推~~ 谢谢~
作者: hsinhsinyu (kelly51326)   2016-08-13 23:53:00

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