Re: [请益] 托福口说求救

楼主: Mydick ( 醉拳甘Mydick)   2016-06-29 04:05:03
※ 引述《a159ab159 (饼干 )》之铭言:
: 各位大大好!
: 想请教口说的一些问题
: 1.考试的时候感觉主要的内容都有讲到,也尽量不要停,也没有说想不到要说什么,
: 可是出来的分数却还是只有17~18分
: 2. 目前也有找人一起练习,但双方口说分数好像没有太大的差异(会不会是两个人程度都不
: 好的关系?)
: 3. 想知道怎样的标准可以达到20分以上
: 20分以上口说听起来要符合哪些标准、该怎么加强,那些点需要注意
: 非常感谢各位大大宝贵的意见
本鲁小小乡民, 发个纯粹帮忙无广告讯息文 & 先感谢专家老师们指教,会努力再学习改进
用文字描述口说答案/标准, 我的才华有限(真的不会上色,) 谨贴两个示范音档:
Task1 What will you do when you have a lot of assingments to do?
Task1 Your friend is about to drop out from school; what is your advice?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s16WziwyFENR
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0U2ue1kZY9y
小分析
1.如果几次都未达20分, 我推测可能是:
(1) 以中文发声方式来讲英文, 阿逗仔考官不容易理解。
解决方案 Rachel's English: https://www.youtube.com/user/rachelsenglish
这位YoutTube上有名的老师, 擅长用剖面图和手指来示意各发声器官的相对位置。
认真看下来, 你会发现英文跟中文发声方式差得很远, 万万不能用明朝的剑去斩清朝的官
(2) 说话重音和节奏是母语国台语的习惯, 阿逗仔考官抓不到一句话该有的重音
(例如:动词加重/ 重点名词加重等)这个很难克服, 版上示范得很好的老师是SK2的David,
他分享的Dropbox音档重音都很正确明晰, 是TOEFL入门学生极有价值的参考范例。
(3) 另外也可以参考 Notefull Toefl 著名的教学影片,
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6434B98632F06DB0
Joseph老师说话慢慢稳稳的, 众多YouTube示范影片中最好模仿(风险就是模板太多人用)
发声跟重音非强项的人最好不要卯起来讲快, 旁人听录音不知道在公沙小多半是太快了orz
在上面几楼我还有一篇讲句子意思关联性的文 &示范音档, 风向被带歪了(?)
在这里捞起来也供参考 http://vocaroo.com/i/s1nwJDzqSXLe
我回答的时候会努力做到上面提的标准, 标准(3)我平常语速偏快做得也不尽完善,
希望有帮到点忙, 裨益版上一样在跟口说奋战的乡民。
作者: red0423 (JE甫)   2016-06-29 09:26:00
谢谢分享
作者: joycechiau (joycechiau)   2016-06-29 10:25:00
推热心~
作者: fulgent (hermeneutic)   2016-06-29 11:42:00
因应 lasaman 的要求(“若有逐字稿更好”),我帮各位原样听写 M 大口说 response 的逐字稿-Task 1: What will you do when you have a lot ofassignments to do?My answer: When I have a lot of assignments to do,the first action I usually take is to prioritize mytasks. By "prioritizing," I mean I'd determine what'surgent and what to put on the back burner. Forexample, I'll surely start with those projects as isthey're about to due, and let these take up my timefirst. Secondly, I'll try to stay alone before I feellike I'm done with the pressure. This not only helpsme put responsibility over social life, but alsohelps me focus. An example could be like signing outfrom all social media such as the Twitter or theFacebook, or that all calls on my phone turned intothe voicemail. That way, I have a better chance tofocus and finish the assignment on time.Task 1, the question: Your friend is consideringdropping out from school-what is your advice?My answer: I'll say, "Go ahead!" But by telling he orshe to do such a thing, I mean a heart knows what aheart wants, right? So we gotta stay loyal to ourtrue feelings. If dropping out is what feels rightjust at this moment, just do it. Hit the pausebutton, and reconsider the pathway to the future.Some American college students or graduates take agap year as a way to figure out what's next, so whynot? But I'll still consider and warn this friend ofmine that he or she should take full responsibilityfor this important decision. For example, if this isgonna disappoint the parents or friends, face it. Andif this means the beginning of adult life, he or shehas to manage to find a job and be independentfinancially and all.以上仅忠实还原;文法、句构是否要精修就交给 M 大决定,我只明确指出一点:due 没有动词用法,所以 "about todue" 是不对的。M 大的回应内容很切题,值得各位学习-亮点很多,好比 put sth on the back burner 这个惯用语就用得很精准、漂亮;"a heart knows what a heart wants"是很有趣的表达法,令人想起 Selena Gomez 的歌 "TheHeart Wants What It Wants"。Rachel 的频道确实不错-她和英国的 Minoo 一起录制的“美式 vs. 英式发音”影片蛮有趣的。
作者: lasaman (拥抱初衷的心)   2016-07-04 07:22:00
谢谢Fulgent大大的用心

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