本身是国立大学研究生，由于想申请国外的学校需要托福79分
没有考过任何英检 大学是用修全英语课方式过毕业门槛
托福状况是自修练习
目前状况阅读在时间内答题正确7成 听力大约是8成以上
这部分到这里应该是个坎要上去可能要累积很多东西
现在比较大的问题是说跟写的部分 要是连基本分都拿不到听跟读是救不回来的
所以目前这是目前练习写作第一次的状况 非常之难看
希望板友可以评一下这样大概有多少分 哪里需要改进
接下来一天都会各练习两篇 想做一下冲刺
至于说的部分大概跟这状况差不多
已下就是小弟的破文章.......题目是托福OG的
首先是整合
In the lecture, the man casts doubt on the information presented in the
passage.
First of all, the reading passage mentions that making a team for individual
project is a perfect decision, Therefore, the project will be worked
efficiently and creatively than be worked alone.
But, the lecturer points out that the project may not move quickly. Because
of it take too much of time to reach consensus. And the truly creative and
viable proposal may be rejected by the unsuitable team leader or someone in
charge.
Second, the reading passage assert that the consequence of a decision no
matter it succeed or fail would not be counted on only one person but the
whole team. However, the lecturer argues that this role has a big problem.
If there is a free-rider, he can take advantage of the group success without
paying. And as above said, an inappropriate leader make the team work in the
wrong way, and it blame on everyone.
Finally, the reading passage claims that assembling people in a team is good
to the individual's feeling by having honor from other teammates.
Nevertheless, the lecturer thinks differently. The free-rider will break the
passion of those who work hard and make the contribution. And the bad leading
and rejection will also kill the great mate's soul.
然后是独立
From my point of view, I will strongly agree that always telling the truth is
the most important consideration in any relationship. While telling a lie
sounds a comfortable way in some situations, in fact, telling the truth will
bring more benefits to you.
There are three advantages of telling the truth that why I agree with.
First of all, the trust is the all means of a relationship. If you are not
trust worthy, how can I get along with you? Once you lied and I found it, we
would lose the trust between us. Next time you tell me something, and I need
to consider about the truth. Our relationship will be in the struggle.
On the other hand, telling the truth is pretty good for your feeling. You don
’t need to always worry about people will expose your lie or you lie would
be found. You will feeling comfortable with others. So I believe that always
telling the truth is healthy to your heart and your relationship.
Last but not least, telling the truth can test your relationship. To be
realistic, telling the truth is going to test that is he or she trust-worthy?
And can he or she accept the real, the whole you? Truth have its weight in
everyone’s heart. So if you can bear each other’s truth, your relationship
would be unshakable.
For the above reasons, I support that always telling the truth definitely is
more beneficial.
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