Re: 英文自传求批

楼主: vosser (二的四次方)   2019-07-09 19:00:09
非常感谢aXr2大大的关心,让小弟甚感惶恐。
先做个澄清,我的留言没有拿来做武器、也没有不尊重任何人的意图。但我没有说明白也
是事实,谢谢aXr2大您的指教。
我原述的“好像没看过这样的格式”是因为我看到原原po及aXr2大在履历罗列的第一段用
自介讲了学历背景;第二段开始,使用条列的方式举出自己的经历、技能和奖项,这样的
写法确实不符合美式resume或是英式cv的写法。
如果要英文的自介(同英式履历的cover page),还是建议维持第一人称的方式扼要阐明
自身的优势,强烈建议不要超过2/3页。再多的话,HR或用人主管也看不下去。
倒是在resume或cv页,再使用条列的方式写出自己的学经历、技能、得奖情形及其他社团
活动等等。这部分可以适时的一两句描述在该奖项或活动中自己有什么贡献或收获。
既然aXr2大都愿意抛砖引玉了,我也改个cover page给原原po参考。
I am XXX, a junior student at Chiayi University, currently majoring in Marketi
ng and Tourism Management. I am interested in your long-term internship posit
ion for Social Marketing, in which I can contribute my knowledge to and develo
p a further comprehension of the industry.
Studying in College of Arts and Letters, I have prepared myself very well in u
tilizing Microsoft Office tools in various tasks. For example, I developed a p
lanning tool to help plan a cherish event in 2013 and a book-keeping tool to m
aintain revenues and expenses for Kid Castle in 20XX. Not only that I gained
a sense of achievement in these occasions, but also these changes saved xx% an
d xx% of workforce, respectively.
Besides technical knowledge with computing tools, I also have professional exp
eriences from participating in Social Network Relationship Podcast, winning th
e championship for National Universities of Green Tourism Creative Travel Plan
ning Competition, and joining Foxconn student internship program. One precious
take-away from these extracurricular programs was that I had to cooperate wit
h others, combining our interpersonal and interpersonal skills, to achieve a c
ommon goal.
I have a great passion for this position, and my schedule is flexible after Ju
ly 7. Please kindly consider me as a potential candidate; with adequate traini
ng, I can provide a great value for the Company.
想讨论可以提出来没关系,毕竟有讨论才有进步。谢谢。
作者: anr2 (???)   2019-07-11 16:01:00
前几天有点激动了 抱歉

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