[履历] 设计类英文自传求批

楼主: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-19 23:57:23
年后转职...前工作是展览和互动科技相关
下一份工作也想找类似的,但职缺很少,所以可能也会投室内设计相关
英文自传是附在作品集resume的后面页,简单排了下版字数大概是一面左右
希望大家可以帮忙看看有哪里需要修改的,谢谢
(话说写这个真的有台湾公司会看吗...?)
After graduated from the college, I have two years of experience in the
field of space design. The experience in cooperating with multitalented
professionals to finish exhibition projects enables me to be more
open-minded about any possibility of design. Exhibition design industry
is a fast-paced and high-pressure environment that makes me a quick
problem solver, effective communicator and a generalist designer.
In the previous work, I participated in seven bidding exhibition projects
with the team members. Most of the projects contained interactive design
and multimedia contents such as VR, AR, Kinect, projection and all those
integrated applications. As a space designer of the projects, I integrated
virtual contents with real space to create unique experience, and also
enjoyed cooperating with people from different backgrounds. With the
experience in large-scale projects, I have the ability to handle complex
situation and integrate various resource. Take the VR launch event held
by HTC and National Palace Museum for example, we overcame the site and
budget to complete a huge mirror runway stage for VR dancing performance
and lighting show in HTC headquarter within only three days.
Because of the interdisciplinary working environment, I began to learn
the logic of programming and knew how innovative technologies applied in
the commercial design and arts nowadays. Furthermore, I began to participate
in workshops related to programming and human-computer interaction such as
Arduino and Processing workshop. These new methods of design stimulate me to
rethink the relationship between user experience and space design, and they
also indicate that the virtual reality integration is the future trend in
all the design industry.
I believe that being a interdisciplinary designer is crucial in present
society in that there are enormous new technologies, materials and values
emerging continuously. So I tried to comprehensively practice design in
different area from photography to installations and from programming
scripts to constructing real space. I expect myself to be a generalist
in design with continuous hunger after new information and knowledge and
with strong passion toward professional design field.
作者: xiangming (乡民)   2017-02-20 00:14:00
嗯...英文cv还是建议用条列式的 句型是一定有问题的
楼主: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 00:21:00
比较像autobiography吧. 前面resume的部分就有条列了想要补充一点人格特质等比较感性的资讯
作者: RachelMay   2017-02-20 00:32:00
千言万语不如上传issuu弄美一点
楼主: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 00:33:00
这是一定要的>< 想问问这种bio有没有什么应该避免的内容
作者: skyprayer (洗碗工)   2017-02-20 00:58:00
除非你英文程度不错 不然不需要特地写英文自传而且你要有把握你的用字文法都不差 不然没加分反而扣分当然如果你找的设计工作是外商或得频繁用英文沟通那就加上吧 建议找翻译社帮忙润稿 大约500~1500搞定
作者: st9150820 (姿姿)   2017-02-20 01:02:00
觉得句法有点中式英文 也有一些文法错误而且文章结构也像是直接中文作文翻英文
楼主: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 01:15:00
有参考了一些网络上的自传写法,但也无法明确指出是哪里有问题...结构上是第一段简单说明工作经验,二三段学到的内容,最后一段是对自己的期许
作者: sc1 (sc1)   2017-02-20 02:19:00
转行要趁早 免得又上来po资遣要不到钱文楼上住户的意见都做到了还是22k
作者: a31415926 (Adam smith)   2017-02-20 09:22:00
well… 老实说你的自传仍是中式英文
作者: alice78226 (紫)   2017-02-20 13:07:00
可以搜寻一下心智图以及topic sence的东西。这两个可以帮你重整文章内容及结构。
作者: lonelystar06 (时间会改变一切)   2017-02-20 16:04:00
英文履历用条列式的
作者: peanutlemon (宝宝爆破专家)   2017-02-22 04:16:00
做设计的都知道要用图片说话 拿出你的优势~
作者: gicofe1009 (好事成双)   2017-02-23 22:34:00
组织性不够强,有些英文用法太中式,直接看英文母语者写的设计履历,很多都有线上的portfolio

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