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: Argu no.6
: The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to
: regional life.
: "Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business
: opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios's
coporations seeking new business opportunities should start their business
close to their market but a place with low unemplyment rate.
What's more, there's possibility that the recent reccession had more impact
on other undustries such as food industry but not on R&D. In this case,
it's not supriseing that Helio which focus on R&D had lower unemployement rate
then others.
: unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial
: center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of
: the region's manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand
: its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and
: development of innovative technologies."
then in this case, it'll not be a good idea for coporations that don't
take research and developemtn of innocation tech that important to have a
new business there.
More over, since Helio'll be the center of R&D, it, apparently, will be
competitive and difficult for Cop. to start their new business there.
: Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
: flaws:
: 1.The effect of low unemployment rate may let Corporations hard to find
: employees. Than Helios may not be a good location which Corporations find.
: 2.The data of unemployment rate may be unfair.
: 3.The industrial center may not be suit for each type of Corporations.
: 4.The environment of industrial center may has been bad because of pollution.
: 5.Attracting other types of companies may weaken its industrial base.
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: issue no.6
: "There is only one definition of success - to be able to spend your life in
: your own way."
: To what extent do you agree or disagree with this definition of success?
: Support your position by using reasons and examples from your reading, your
: own experience, or your observation of others.
: disagree:
: 1.There are many definitions of success.
: ex: some like money, but others like fame.
: 2.Living in their own way but no goals is not successful.
: ex: nomad is free, but others view him as loser.
: 2.Someone must spend their life on hard tasks, but they are successful in
: their profession.
: ex: the president is very busy, but undoubtly he is successful in politics