等等 我看X上面的原影片 怎么看起来是稿子上的文法很怪 反而是黄国昌讲的时候修正了不少啊
原文: ... to call for restoration of judicial justice and preservation of Taiwan's democracy...
黄: to call for [1;32mthe restoration of judicial justice and the preservation of Taiwan's democracy...
这里的确是要加 the 的吧
原文: ...What happened for the past several months indicates the serious setback of judicial independence and the harm it causes to our democracy...
黄: ...What has transpired over the past few months reveals the serious setback in judicial independence and the harm it has caused to our democracy...
我不知道是不是全用过去式就好了(非母语的常常过度使用完成式) 但原文那个时态变来变去绝对是很怪的吧