会不会被学姐吉阿
※ 引述《uuuuOPuff ( ♥宠虫倚泡芙 ♥)》之铭言：
: 小佑好强\(＞﹏＜)/
: ※ 引述《samok (记者只会抄公社低卡记录7)》之铭言：
: : How's everything going?/ What's going on?
: : admitted在这边比较像是申请还没过关的感觉，如果两句写在一起会比较好
: : EX:I'm going to study in a language school in Los Angeles in next month.
: : 关系比较熟用Could 就可以了 还有记得要加to
: : (may/could 原型 但help后面+to V是帮...的意思)
: : Could you help me to rent a house there in advance?
: : (要不要预先我这边感觉不出来 我是不会写in advance啦 但没什么问题我就先留着)
: : 我觉得不用to
: : 这句怪怪的 我会写 In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.
: : 然后我会摆最后
: : I hope you can find a house by those followings.
: : 英文的冒号(colon)千万别乱用 乖乖点句点就好
: : has to be
: : Second, the area has good public transport network.
: : 你被骗了 用quiet就可以了
: : conclude=结论 include=包括 家具这个名词没写到 furniture(注意不可数)
: : 我会写the room is tidy and it includes some furniture such as bed, desk,
: : and air-conditioner.
: : 我会写If the neighbors were all students instead of Chinese would be better
: : for me.
: : for me.
: : Chinese大写 information加个the
: : Finally 最好摆最后，所以besides可以跟finally对调顺序
: : In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.Thank you very much.
: : 写信的话最好加一句Sincerely,
: : PS: 我差点改linguistic school
: : https://www.hopenglish.com/why-is-there-a-noun-before-a-noun