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※ 引述《samok (记者只会抄公社低卡记录7)》之铭言：
: ※ 引述《samok (记者只会抄公社低卡记录7)》之铭言：
: : 学姊写的作文 待会帮他改一下
: : Dear John
: : How's everything going on? I want to tell you a great news that I was
: How's everything going?/ What's going on?
: : admitted to a language school in Los Angeles. I will study there next month.
: admitted在这边比较像是申请还没过关的感觉，如果两句写在一起会比较好
: EX:I'm going to study in a language school in Los Angeles in next month.
: : May you help me rent a house in advance? I promise to treat you to a fantastic
: 关系比较熟用Could 就可以了 还有记得要加to
: (may/could 原型 但help后面+to V是帮...的意思)
: Could you help me to rent a house there in advance?
: (要不要预先我这边感觉不出来 我是不会写in advance啦 但没什么问题我就先留着)
: : meal as a fairing. I hope you can seek a house corresponding to followings:
: 我觉得不用to
: 这句怪怪的 我会写 In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.
: 然后我会摆最后
: I hope you can find a house by those followings.
: 英文的冒号(colon)千万别乱用 乖乖点句点就好
: : First, the size of house doesn't matter, but the location is close to UCLA.
: has to be
: : Second, the area nearby is good public transport. Third, it is located in a
: Second, the area has good public transport network.
: : quieter area. Fourth, the room is clean and yet it concludes bed, desk,
: 你被骗了 用quiet就可以了
: conclude=结论 include=包括 家具这个名词没写到 furniture(注意不可数)
: 我会写the room is tidy and it includes some furniture such as bed, desk,
: and air-conditioner.
: : air-conditioner. Finally, it might be better for the neighbor being student
: 我会写If the neighbors were all students instead of Chinese would be better
: for me.
: : instead of chinese. Besides, the rent must be reasonable. Please email
: Chinese大写 information加个the
: Finally 最好摆最后，所以besides可以跟finally对调顺序
: : information about the house to me as soon as possible. Thank you very much.
: In return, I promise I will treat you a big meal.Thank you very much.
: : Jenny
: 写信的话最好加一句Sincerely,
: PS: 我差点改linguistic school
: https://www.hopenglish.com/why-is-there-a-noun-before-a-noun