>I wanna share my terrible dinning exprience in eat eat bistro.
1.wanna是口语用法，就算是单纯的抱怨文章也应该避免这种用法。
2.experience拼错。
3.餐厅名称是专有名词应该用引号括起，不然看上去变成了奇怪的文法。
>There are 2 parts in this article.
一般不会这样讲说我文章里面分两个部份，这是很奇怪的Chinglish用法，
用比较烂的There are two thing that I have to complain...之类看起来都比较通顺。
>First, the worst thing,
这写法真的很奇怪，the worst thing通常会直接接个is that...然后对到下句的内容，
而且first(第一件事)和the first（第一次）在这里很容易混淆，其实应该避免这种用法
。
>The airconditioner suddenly stop working and pour a lot of water.
时态...stopped working and poured...
>It makes my waffle and my tablet wet but also my head.
1.时态...It made
2.还有用了but also怎么会把not only去掉了呢？
原句改：It made not only my waffle and tablet but also my head wet.
不过这样还不如：It made my waffle, tablet and my head wet.其实也没比较差啦
3.所以溼的是松饼？不然餐点应该用meal
>But the manager didn't do anything immediately, the part-time job guy felt
embarrassed and say sorry.
1.这句前后很不通顺呀，这感觉像“但是经理没做事。工读生有道歉。”
2.时态时态...有时有有时无
3.part-time job guy太怪了...不过如果不是在单纯问对方支薪方式，还不如直接用
clerk就好了
However, the manager didn't do anything immediately. I could only see the
part-time worker felt embarrassed and said sorry.
>The manager only ask the others give us new dishes, he even didn't say sorry
> to us until we left.
1.时态时态......
2.the others??什么的the others?
3.连接词消失了
4.give new dishes....Chinglish....
这和上一句不如合并重改
I could only see the part-time worker felt embarrassed and said sorry.
However, the manager didn't do anything immediately. He only asked someone to
serve up again, but he didn't apologized until we left.
>这也是让我浪费宝贵时间上来希望告诉大家,以防悲剧再度发That's why I spend my
> leisure time on this article.I DON'T WANT ANYONE HAVE THE SAME TERRIBLE
> EXPERIENCE AS MINE.
1.怎么看这句都应该放在文末。
2.spend my 'leisure' time...好吧，这只能说也是很Chinglish的用法
3.the same as不能这样用，一定得用be动词接，不如直接用likes就好了
>Second, we wait for our waffle for at least 40-50 mins
1.waited
2.不想用minutes？错误百出的文法搭配缩写只会让别人不尊重你的文章
>询问后店员表示因为只有一台松饼机
>The response is there is only one waffle machine.
1.询问后、店员表示都不见了
After we asked the clerk, he said that they have only one waffle machine.
>There are approximate 40 customer or more, actually it's not a good reason.
> You should tell the customer before they order.
1.approximate通常不用在计算人数这种单纯的记数上，表示“以上”就直接用over吧
2.customer可数
BJ4直接改
Nevertheless, there are over 40 customers in the restaurant.
>这并不是一个适当的理由 至少在点菜前应尽告知义务
>actually it's not a good reason.
> You should tell the customer before they order.
BJ4直接改
It was not a good reason. In my opinion, the clerk should tell customers
before they ordered.
个人意见：中文有问题、硬要中翻英，让英文有更大问题
起码看看国外英文食记做参考。
我的英文都已经很破啦...随便看随便出毛病
不知道为何硬要翻英文？