※ 引述《trtr112 (pk)》之铭言：
: 想请教各位先进,
: 有一个句子:
: This place has no real valley, Lazaridis says of Waterloo, and very little
: silicon. But he believes it can become what he describes as the
: world’s “quantum hub.”
: 请问我可以说:
: This place has no real valley when Lazaridis says of Waterloo,and…. (加入
: when, 去掉velley 之后的逗点).
: 这样的改法是可以的吗?
: 谢谢!
想再请问大家:
1. 请问这句可以这样改吗?
a. When Lazaridis says of Waterloo, he says/thinks that this place
has no real valley and very little silicon. (加入when, 放句首)
(一直想要把 when 加入句子里 XD)
b. Lazaridis says of Waterloo, "This place has no real valley and
very little silicon."
( b 句的改法是对的吗？）
2. 这里的 say of 可以用 mention 代替吗?
谢谢!