Re: [闲聊] 用ChatGPT协助写小说的实作、分析及心得

楼主: Vulpix (Sebastian)   2023-02-15 19:54:35
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我也想分享一个算是简单的技巧。
之前有来请教过小说该怎么写,然后我现在还在云第二回……
其实写了大概一半了,但后续我还是没有进度,希望这个月可以结束吧。
第一回连结:https://memes.tw/story/s/O6xegn/p/6LQ7Kn
然后我在第二回想要引进主角,一个因为厄运连连而惨遭勒令退伍的中尉。
然后我想要让他加入我的地下摔角团体。
所以我这么问 ChatGPT:
I'm trying to write a novel about this, but I know little.
Can you help me build up how John, a just-discharged lieutenant,
attends the underground wrestling association?
(a novel about "this" 的 this 是指地下摔角的运作模式,我前面有跟他聊过。)
然后他给了我如下回应:
Sure, here is a rough outline of how John, a just-discharged lieutenant,
might attend an underground wrestling association:
John becomes interested in underground wrestling after watching some videos
online. He is drawn to the raw, intense nature of the matches and the sense
of community among the wrestlers and fans.
He starts following a few underground wrestling federations on social media
and begins to learn more about the scene. He sees that one federation, called
"The Underground Wrestling Association," is hosting an event in his city in a
few weeks.
John decides to attend the event and buys a ticket online. He is excited to
see the matches and meet other fans in person.
On the day of the event, John arrives at the venue, which is a small club in
a sketchy part of town. He sees a group of wrestlers hanging out outside and
introduces himself. They seem friendly and invite him to hang out with them
before the show starts.
John watches the matches from the front row and cheers on his favorite
wrestlers. He meets other fans and starts to feel like he is part of the
underground wrestling community.
After the event, John talks to one of the wrestlers he met earlier and
expresses his interest in getting involved in underground wrestling. The
wrestler introduces him to the promoter of the federation, who is impressed
with John's background and athleticism.
John starts training with the federation and makes his debut at a future
event. He quickly becomes a popular wrestler and starts to make a name for
himself in the underground wrestling scene.
嗯,可以。非常可以。可是我还想修改一些地方。所以我继续要求:
I'd like it be more dramatical. How to make John wrestle on the day he just
get discharged?
这次的回应真的很戏(超)剧(展)性(开),
因为他直接让某个家伙被 KO,然后让男主角顶替上场!???
所以我再次要求:
Modify the story with the following character set of John:
1. John was discharged from military since he made great mistakes (due to his
bad luck).
2. John is strong and is skilled in boxing.
3. John is unyielding, stubborn and loyal.
和:
Modify the script by the following story: In the intermission, John goes to
the bathroom and he is so excited that he starts shadow boxing. Meanwhile,
"The Rebel" rushes into the bathroom, and John knocks out "The Rebel" by
accident so that "The Rebel" could not continue wrestling.
总之流程就是他帮我补满细节,我再告诉他怎么一点一点修。
最后我是要求他写成小说了:
Rewrite this story as a novel. You may use dialogues to shape the
characteristics of the characters. Remember that the opponent of John in the
wrestling match is named Mark, short but very talented. Mark is both skillful
and powerful. Mark is also careless so that he made a bad call and lost the
farm many times.
之后又追加了后续故事的发展方向,就把整个故事大致敲定了。
很方便的地方是,有时候对于某些剧情开怎么展开会不确定,因为我就是不懂。
想办法找了资料来学习,但进度缓慢又不知道何时到头。
这时候让他帮忙掰点故事就不错。
上面大致上做了:
1. 设定角色。在这段故事中够用就好,所以不要太详细。
2. 决定故事结局。
3. 如果故事偏离所想可以重骰,或加入新设定再聊一次。
最后的结果其实让我颇为满意,我只要用他当底,再用中文好好改写一番就好。
可能有人会说那我干么不直接让他写我的小说。
我就想用自己的文字表达嘛!
而且比赛流程我也是要重来的。
之前让 ChatGPT 设计的比赛流程几乎都差不多,我腻了。
自己设计比较嗨。
作者: earldunn (yes)   2023-02-15 19:57:00
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作者: Justisaac (灰色的天空)   2023-02-15 20:02:00
中文部分其实给他你想要的元素他能描写得很不错XD

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